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Burdens

Saturday, February 18, 2006

Sometimes the heaviest part of a load is figuring out when to share it.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3146    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: Burdens

Author: Ana Sedai

Rating: PG

Character(s): Mal, River

Prompt: 072 - Myth

Word Count: 900

A/N: Okay, this is 11/100. I now have something resembling a plan, so these should start coming a bit faster.

Also, I have no idea how artificial gravity fields work in outer space, so I'm taking a little license.

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“Alright River, just pull it up easy there, like I showed you, and then-”

“She understands and comprehends. Doesn’t need to be held up.”

River shot a mildly annoyed glance across to Mal where he sat in the other pilot’s chair.

He shot a glare right back.

“Look, just ‘cause you’re a mechanical genius and all don’t mean you’re ready to take on a whole lot of convoluted acrobatics yet. This ship and everyone on her, includin’ you, are my responsibility. So if I say we’re gonna go over something again, that’s the way it’s gonna be. Dong ma?”

They were three days out from Persephone, and while Mal wasn’t expecting any more trouble from Badger than they usually got, what they usually got was considerable. So, he’d figured it was high time River learned more about piloting than just getting from Point A to Point B. Of course, that involved teaching, which wasn’t his strong suit to begin with, and when that was combined with River’s chaffing at the bit to try ever-riskier moves, the occasional flare-up was inevitable. Like this one, for example.

She didn’t drop her gaze, but her eyes softened a bit when she sensed his worry.

“Think everything is your responsibility. Try to hold it all up without falling. You don’t trust enough to let someone else help carry it. Your name isn’t Atlas, though; it’s Mal.”

He sighed. He did that a lot around her.

“I know that, but you know I’m not exactly the most trustful man in the ‘verse. It’s a whole lot easier for me if I just keep on carryin’ things, instead of wonderin’ if whoever helps is gonna drop ‘em. Now, let’s just go over this one more time…”

Four days of living

Comments
Saturday, 18 February 2006 19:00
Absolutely adored this. I have always had a soft spot for Mal and River, there is just so much there between them that is instinctual. You tap into that part of their relationship beautifully. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 19 February 2006 05:26
so when is the next part going up?
Sunday, 19 February 2006 09:29
This is very good. Their attitudes are spot on. I hope to see more.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 22 February 2006 02:25
You write so well, I'm really enjoying these.
Friday, 17 March 2006 19:07
yay!!! ana's back!!! not sure where you went, but whatever. i'm just happy there's more fic.

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ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 18 March 2006 15:56
more please

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