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Stability

Sunday, May 21, 2006

Everything else swirls around her, but Mal remains still.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3128    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: Stability

Author: Ana Sedai

Rating: PG

Character(s): BDC (Big Damn Crew) (again)

Prompt: 020 - Still

Word Count: 967

A/N: 19/100 for Mal/River Joss100.

Summary: Everything else swirls around her, but Mal remains still.

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Another day, another ill-advised caper. They were on Beaumonde, scheduled to pick up some slightly less-than-legal contraband from Badger’s contact, a factory owner who didn’t hold a very high opinion of the local economic laws. Serenity was in her usual pre-job state of controlled bedlam.

“Hey, has anyone seen my auto-adjuster?” Kaylee was making last-minute modifications to the Mule, since this cargo was supposed to be a tad bigger than most. Her tools normally were quite well-organized. But, she had been a mite distracted lately…

“Where in the ‘verse is my autoclave?” was Simon’s frustrated yell as he marched into the bay. He was trying to take stock of the infirmary supplies, on the not-so-off chance that something would go wrong that required a stitch or twenty.

“I ain’t tryin’ to be difficult. But no way am I goin’ out again with no grenades!”

“It’s a factory, Jayne. It’s a factory filled with lots of things that go boom. One grenade of yours gets loose, and we’re gonna be among those things.”

Zoe and Jayne were having a rather heated discussion about his tendency to enlist slightly more firepower than was strictly needed for the job at hand. This was assuming that job wasn’t the takeover and subjugation of a small moon, of course.

Mal stood in the middle of the cargo bay, arms folded, a simultaneously affectionate and amused expression on his face as he watched the antics.

And River watched Mal.

She had perched herself on the catwalk above the bay, enjoying the swirl of color and movement as everyone went about their business. Or is that ‘busyness’? she thought, and smiled. She watched the patterns of movement and voices, saw ho

Comments
Sunday, 21 May 2006 19:20
Absolutely brilliant! I could so see these thoughts going through River's head and Mal's affection and need to protect and lead is just perfect. He is the centre of their little world and in a odd shiny kind of way, River is the star they are guided by. Lovely, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 21 May 2006 19:21
Ohh. i like. very believable and in character.
Monday, 22 May 2006 06:49
Gotta love River reflective moments..especially when they're about our favourite transport captain with a penchant for tightly tailored trousers...ooh...alliteration!

;)

BEB
Monday, 22 May 2006 12:48
I like the glimpses of the crew getting ready for the job and I like how River sees Mal.
Wednesday, 24 May 2006 07:00
I've always loved the way that Mal is not put-off by River's 'River-ey' statements, and you've provided a fine example of that here. You capture both of their voices beautifully.

Looking forward to more...
DEEPGIRL187
Thursday, 25 May 2006 18:12
Yipeee! Yay! Woo hoo!

You finally posted another story!

*gives big hug*

As far as I'm concerned, you don't write bad stories. So needless to say, this one was great. Keep up the good work!

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