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Serenity: Sundown (Complete)

Thursday, February 16, 2006

The outline is done! I don't know if it's really all that good. It seems short and doesn't have too much going until halfway through but then I didn't choreograph any of the fight scenes really. I'm just glad I finally got all of the things I wanted to see in a Serenity sequel down somewhere. Thanks to everyone who read it or will. I might still put out another version with more attention paid to dialogue, more scenes, or choreographed fight scenes but for now I'm going to take a break yet I'll tell you nothing makes me want to write more than lots o feedback.

**I just added an epilogue of sorts that shows the crew doing stuff on the ship before they come to dinner.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2578    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Characters

Mal

Happier but more distant. He hasn’t been happy the way he is now for a long time and it’s bothering him. He has a “family” but he’s not sure about the whole people depending on him thing. This is shown is the distance he’s begun to show the crew especially Inara. He hasn’t quite found that faith Book told him to get yet but he’s in a position where there’s the possibility for that.

Inara

Almost fed up with Mal not talking to her but neither is really willing to give the ghost as it were. Distant from Mal and it shows.

Zoe

Not a good time to mess with her, read on

Jayne

Jayne is still Jayne if not a little bit better man after the events of Serenity

Kaylee

As always bursting with optimism. Comfortable with Simon

Simon

Comfortable with Kaylee. Not nearly as protective with River. Not nearly as much as an outsider

River

Not so crazy anymore and more like her brother

Look for this line somewhere in this when this thing is done,

“The Tams seem to come in only two flavors, crazy and pompous, River’s a twist.”

Scene: We see an operative in a western looking setting

We are looking at his distinctive boots as he walks along

The camera comes up to see his face stern and yet solemn

We switch to a wide shot and see about four or five thieves step out

It is obvious they are there to rob him

All of them have knives.

The operative’s facial expression doesn’t change in the slightest

As soon as one comes at him they are all dispatched in quick succession.

The operative uses martial arts and the thieves weapons against them

He also uses pressure points to suggest he’s an operative

When its done he just begins walking again

We see him from the side and when he is off frame we cut to…

Scene: We see our Captain Reynolds sweaty and more than a little uncalm walking quickly into the dormitory hallway of Serenity . The shot settles as the captain’s face is seen in full on the left half of the screen and Kaylee can be seen coming in behind

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 16 February 2006 13:55
Great stuff. So when's it going to be a movie?
Thursday, 16 February 2006 17:52
I wish. If I could have a moment to pipe dream here, this is it:

If I could. At the next, big fan convention or whatnot where all of the actors came (and I had mind control powers to make them do what I wanted). I would have them read it like a radio play or a JLU recording(considereing a good half of the cast has done voicework on that or something else) since fans are such a huge part of firefly, they would play supporting characters. I would record it. It wouldn't have to be perfect, and then take that recording and make a flash movie or something around it maybe even cg.

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