Serenity: Sundown
Monday, January 23, 2006
This is the beginning of my Serenity sequel fanfic. I'm writing it so I don't go crazy with all of the possibilities a sequel might bring. I wrote it like a movie script but I've never written a movie script so I'm sorry if it sucks. I'm just a fan. note: anything in{} I expect would be said in chinese.
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 2759 RATING: 9.0 (PG13) SERIES: FIREFLY
Scene: We see our Captain Reynolds sweaty and more than a little uncalm walking quickly into the dormitory hallway of Serenity . The shot settles as the captain’s face is seen in full on the left half of the screen and Kaylee can be seen coming in behind him out of focus on the right. He looks back not really looking like he wants to ask the question he is about to.
Mal
Gasou! She’s hot! Kaylee what temp she runnin?
Kaylee
Too hot, captain!
Mal
(Ordering)Get the doc down there to help you and make sure she’s taken care of.
Scene: Jayne enters from where Kaylee and the captain had come from
Jayne
She’s about to blow if you ask me. Leaking everywhere and making sounds I ain’t never imagined.
Mal
(quickly)Shut up, Jayne!
(yelling at the cockpit)Can you set a course and land somewhere River, preferably with all the help we’ll be need’n?
Scene: Cut to a close-up of River looking over her shoulder with a smile on her face
River
Sure.
Mal
Good crazy girl. I’ll be up there in just a sec. (Turns to Kaylee) Go. Now.
Scene: Cut to Kaylee entering Simon’s room. Simon is asleep with the blankets around him and in his pajamas.
Kaylee
(worried and somewhat scared)Simon, Get up! We’re going to need your help!
Simon
(sleepily)What?! Wait?! What’s going on?!
Kaylee
(explaining and getting angry)She’s in pain I can hear her from here and you need to get your {ass} down there to help!
Simon
(rationalizing and tired)Would you just hold on a second, Kaylee. We seem to be landing ok I’m sure whatever’s wrong with the ship can at least wait until I have my shirt and pants on. Can’t it?
Kaylee
(explaining in the way one would about consequences to a third grader)
Zoe’s water broke. She’s gone into contractions and we can’t figure out what painkillers to give her. She’s getting a tad irritable and we think she might be ill to make matters worse.
Simon
(surprised and somewhat horrified)
Oh.
Scene: Cut to Zoe’s face in pain in the infirmary
Zoe
AGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!
<i>Yep, you’ll be needing something for the pain</i>
Best line EVER!!
Will/can you please write more?! i keep reading storys of zoe give'n birth and not screaming to loud or showing to much pain and some times i thought even if zoe tends to be some what stoical she would express the pain unless the situation was hard on the captain like during a reaver attack or a shoot out or some other thing like that where she might think mal needed to concentrate on the situation at hand more then on her. but yeah i like you zoe, i like you smallish inara bits, all though inara i thoink would not point out that jayne did not get a gift for the baby at the shower unless she felt she needed to. she tends to have tact and grace and then lose some of it with mal, you see he spins her about and fogs thins up for her so one wrong move and she loses her poise. and she does it to him, they make each other more human. I like that zoe tells mal off for not doing something about inara, shoot finaly he gets the chance and he leaves her there waiting. it would have to be around nine months since miranda if zoe has already had the kid, that is alot of waiting! did he at lease give her a sign that he was still in to her, did they talk a bit even. or do they still fight like children when they try to talk? what has happened in the last 9-ish months not only with mal and inara but with every one?
You can't take the sky from me
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