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The Best Deceptions: Ch 6

Thursday, February 9, 2006

There's a lot of talking. A lot. But there's some other stuff too. A lot of that as well. Jayne/Kaylee, NC-17.

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CHAPTER SIX.

"That's what he called me."

She whispered it up to him and Jayne could see both her confusion and an ache in her eyes. It reminded him of having an infected tooth pulled, it hurt like hell, but it was relief more than it was pain.

"Figured as much." He pulled at her waist softly, just enough so that her head lolled forward and he rested his jaw on her forehead. "You wanna talk about it?"

Her breath ghosted over the front of his neck.

"No." She leaned into him, he could feel the whole point of her body turn to him, her voice thick. "Not really."

"Then you wanna sit down?"

Her head bobbed up and down slowly, taking his with it and he led them over to the table. He was lost and the only thing he knew how to do was pull the chair out and settle her, his hand moving from her waist to the back of her shoulders.

It couldn't be anything as easy as someone needin

Comments
CANTONHEROINE
Thursday, 09 February 2006 12:15
Oh, wow. That was just all kinds of wonderful. There are so many great lines in here, I don't dare pick a favourite.

No doubt about it - you are the Queen of Jaylee. ;P
BOOKADDICT
Thursday, 09 February 2006 12:28
Oh my god! *fans self* Very hot.

Another excellent chapter. I like Lily being all selfish and Jayne getting it.

Love the explanation about Kaylee's early years and Jayne doing her hair.

More please?

ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 February 2006 14:40
Gwenfrewi here. In a hurry.

Wow. I just took a shower and now I need another.

And is there nothing sexier than a man who'll brush your hair.
HUMBUG
Thursday, 09 February 2006 15:17
Just fan-ruttin'-tastic, Jacqui!!

At last - they got it together - AND they were talking about the future on Serenity (sharing a bunk, having kids).

Squeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Just Shiny!!! :0

Keep going. What happens next when the crew come for Ma Fry's Christmas Dinner??.............
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 February 2006 16:22
You are my favorite fanfic author, and this is by far my favorite Jaylee story. Please hurry with the next chapter! Thanks for all of your work.
RAVENHAIR
Thursday, 09 February 2006 16:44
Holy Hell! Nice ending...I shouldn't be reading this at work!

I second it: you are the Queen of Jaylee!

I don't think I've read anything here with as much anticipation as I had this morning when I saw this posted!

Loving this (as if I need to say it)!
SEARINGFLESH55
Thursday, 09 February 2006 16:48
Loved it!!

Especially the explaination of how she got the nickname Kaylee. It made me wanna cry!

Now for the the crew to arrive! YAY!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 February 2006 19:53
more please
KAIE
Friday, 10 February 2006 00:18
WOW!!!

Gotta love this!

Tender moments and hotness all in one.

Waiting for the next!
HISGOODGIRL
Friday, 10 February 2006 19:25
Mow I know what you've been so busy with. Girlfriend, you are the BEST.

All I was hoping for and then some.
Thanks!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 11 February 2006 21:23
Thanks!

The crew arrives "tomorrow", right? I don't like this mine...
but it was wonderful to read and pleasse, please, write more soon (very soon)!!!
AmeliaP (at work)
VENA
Sunday, 12 February 2006 05:26
I have to agree: the queen of Jaylee is fan-ruttin'-tastic!! Wicked job.
"And there were his damn hands, comin' around her waist all warm and dizzifying and distracting and... dammit, she was mad."
Well, I've got really long hair and I'd have a real hard time being mad too if my man settled an argument by brushing out my hair. Mmmm
BELLONA
Monday, 20 February 2006 17:36
the queen of jaylee needs a crown, gorramit!!! just for this little line:
"I told 'em how much you both rolled in the night anyway and they all got real quiet after that."

b

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