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The Losing Side, chapter 9

Sunday, January 22, 2006

The story of Mal's experiences after the war continues. This chapter is all Zoe, though.

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"Do you hate me now?" Lee's voice startled Zoe ; she'd not been aware of his presence in the storeroom a guard had abruptly shoved her into.

"Hate what you stand for, hate whoever did that to him. Can't say I hate you in particular."

Lee nodded, emerging from the shadows and studying the handcuffed woman standing almost defiantly before him. "Corporal, this is my prison and my command. I feel responsible for what my men did to him, and I want to see him clear of this. Imagine you do too."

Zoe didn't reply. Like Mal, she found herself trusting Lee instinctively. Unlike Mal, however, her military training overrode any desire to open up to him, especially where the last remaining person in the 'verse who meant something to her was concerned.

Lee didn't seem surprised by her lack of reply. He said "I've read every report, every interview transcript including yours, every detail about your Sergeant Reynolds, and I don't think I've ever run across a man who's inspired more loyalty. I saw him do something so stupidly heroic that I gotta feel the same way."

Zoe's lips twitched in a slight smile. Stupidly heroic; that was one way to describe him, she supposed. She had a notion that he was far more intelligent about it than most people might realize, but that was for them to figure out on their own. "You really want to help him?" she challenged.

"Yes," replied Lee. "I do, and before I can do a single thing I gotta know he's thinking straight. I'm afraid with everything he's been through......." His voice trailed off. "He's in a tight spot, and I got to know he cares about that."

"Get him out of that place." Zoe found it hard to control the ferocity that was trying to creep into her voice. "You want to help him, you get him out of that box you have him locked in and put him someplace where he can act and feel like an actual human."

Lee understood the barely veiled accusation. "I'm not trying to be cruel, Corporal. I want to see your Sergeant get out of here alive, and I put him in

Comments
Sunday, 22 January 2006 17:09
Ooh, good take on Zoe. Don't mind at all that Mal's not in this chapter 'cause she's there, doing her part to get him free. Looking forward to the next installment.

"I love my captain."
Sunday, 22 January 2006 20:32
I'm really enjoying your series and looking forward to the next installment. Excellent writing and the characterization is right on.
Sunday, 22 January 2006 21:41
Wow, excellent writing and I am really beginning to trust Lee. I love the way you portray Zoe and her loyalty to Mal, it is something beautiful to behold. Can't wait for the next chapter! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 22 January 2006 22:22
can never get enough of Zoe. Fantastic backstory. Very credible. I hope you plan on taking this up to the moment that Mal buys Serenity. Your vision is worthy of canon.
Monday, 23 January 2006 14:24
I should have commented sooner - I've really been enjoying this series! Zoe is perfect in this one - I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Saturday, 29 April 2006 17:10
I hadn't realized how far behind on reviewing I'd fallen until I looked again at the posting date of this chapter--sorry! I've been reading, and enjoying, diligently.

This was another chapter rich in character development and interaction. Lee is a complex and real character. I like the pragmatism of him, and of Zoe, the way you write them. Your characterizations are all well-shaded with their noble actions always tempered with reality; never sappy.

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