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Antebellum - Book I: Chapter Six

Wednesday, January 18, 2006

The sixth chapter in a Big Damn Sequel series. In this installment: A short introduction to the new defrostees.

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A/N: First want to say thanks a thousand for your comments, peoples. I had a bit of trouble getting this chapter out, but the next couple should be up and rolling in soon time. Again, you all are awesome, and I'm glad you're readin'. Behold!

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Book One – Chapter Six

2514 – Six years ago

‘UNIFICATION’

The word sent a distinct shiver down River’s shoulders and back. Carved into the stone monument, the word seemed to have been forged there by the gods themselves. Underneath it was the same word in Chinese; underneath that was the word in Arabic.

Green grass. Much greener than the grass on Osiris. These colors seemed to shine their own light, making a beautiful picture of luminescence in the rest of the courtyard. Nothing like this grew on any planet she had ever been to. They didn’t even look like they had been cut. Every blade seemed to grow the exact right length.

River knew that they must have been genetically enhanced, likely using Foxxilin or Neothemia, but they smelt and felt just like natural grass.

She looked up at the stone monument. It was some sort of abstract sculpture of the solar system, with a tablet with the god-like words hanging above it. The stones themselves appeared to be shining.

All around it there were other students, all of them older than she.

“River!”

River turned at her name to see Counselor Ioseph motioning over to her with two other gentlemen, both of them wearing white suits. And striped ties. She obediently made her way over to the three men, smiling shyly.

“River,” Counselor Ioseph said, “I’d like you to meet two of our directors.” He motioned toward the younger of the two. “This is Doctor Samuel Mathias.”

“How do you do?” Mathias barely even looked at her. He seemed to be in a heated discussion with the older man. The older man wasn’t taking part in that discussion.

“I’m well, thank you,” River responded warmly.

“And this,” Ioseph said, motioning to the other

Comments
ANA
Wednesday, 18 January 2006 02:28
Okay, now I'm gettin' a little creeped out here. Alright, maybe more than a little. This is something that Joss, poor man, never had a chance to get into with the show. Glad to see you're doing a wonderful job filling in the not-inconsiderable blanks. Looking forward to the rest!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 18 January 2006 04:12
A nicely forboding part. Chilling.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
Wednesday, 18 January 2006 07:22
Wow, utterly creepifying. Not sure I am going to survive this story let alone anyone on the ship. Gulp! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 18 January 2006 13:26
Brrrr, chilling! In the best way! Most excited. I like the quiet but deadly inevitability that hangs over the entire chapter, and I adore Agent Oren.

More soon?
Thursday, 19 January 2006 03:11
Very spine tingling, love it. I just picked up on this story but it's quickly becoming a favorite! Please post more soon.
Saturday, 21 January 2006 17:18
that is one creepy family...

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CALMB4THESTORM
Saturday, 28 January 2006 20:55
You make my skin crawl... and I LIKE IT!
Very intense. Love the way your giving us background and filling out the storyline. I state again: once you are finished taking us for this extraordinary trip - seek publication! I'd buy this in print (and so would others). Continue on my Fine Bard! We await your quill, er keyboard.
Saturday, 06 May 2006 16:37
Wow, creepy. This is really very good! Can't wait to see what happens!

That Michael....he better not be touchin' Serenity's girls!

One thing though...6 years ago Gabriella had green eyes. 6 years later she has blue eyes. Oversight or disguised plot point?
Sunday, 07 May 2006 08:39
Yep, Micheal totally creeped me out! And I am curious about J. Thorn , the dead brother. Did Micheal kill him? And I wonder if River can feel their presence when they awaken, them being related and all! Wow, just can't stop reading!!!

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