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Antebellum - Book I: Chapter Fifteen

Wednesday, July 5, 2006

The fifteenth chapter in a Big Damn Sequel series. In this installment: Jayne talks with Zoe about a plan of his... and other stuff happens.

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A/N: Yep, updates are getting far in between, but they are coming. As always, I keep writing so long as you keep reading. Candle Wax, friends!

Book One – Chapter Fifteen

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Simon had a haunting feeling. That horrible nostalgic feeling that created a pit in his stomach, and he found that concentrating on the pit only tore it up more.

He hadn’t been in his sister’s dorm in at least three months, probably more. At most, he would poke his head in to tell her dinner was ready, as if she didn’t already know. It had been years since he had even considered spending a night in the dorm, ready to assist her in case of her midnight attacks. But those nightmares were believed completely in the past. Now that Simon had reason to believe otherwise…

The nostalgic pit had returned.

Back on Osiris, Simon would always shake his head in disbelief at the young orderlies trying to make the beds comfortable for comatose patients. He convinced himself that this was different. Should River wake up suddenly, she might require the extra blankets and pillows. Although, she didn’t really like too much material touching her when she was awake, so Simon figured it was mostly for his own benefit. He had to feel like he was doing something useful.

The color had returned slightly to River’s face, and Simon welcomed the homecoming. She showed no further signs of waking up, but the fact that her body was still taking care of itself gave him a little bit of comfort. He checked her pupils again, just to be sure, and retired yet again when he greeted with no response.

River never locked any of her drawers. All the drawers on Serenity had locks on them, but River never used them. Simon figured that she probably could tell if anyone had any intention on stealing her possessions. That, and she didn’t really keep a lot stored away. Her clothes, obviously, took up the most room, but other than that, she only had a colored pencil kit she had

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Wednesday, 05 July 2006 23:17
>“Kaylee,” he called and watched her turn expectantly. “Um… Would you… I mean

SUCH a tease! I thought he was going to ask her to marry him right then and there! Since he'd been fingering and thinking about the necklace. That was an excellent exchange between them!

Ohh, Jayne and Zoe's conversation was great. Jayne's kind of creeping me out...and the explosion at the end, or what I assume was an explosion...wow....did all of those cryo chambers just explode? Ohhh, tangled webs...I'm really loving this!

Please post the next chapter quickly!
Thursday, 06 July 2006 06:15
you're an amazing writer
Thursday, 06 July 2006 15:08
oooh! A very creepy chapter. Leaves you with that uneasy pit in your stomach. I'm guessing this is going to get much darker before the end.

Well written as always.
CALMB4THESTORM
Friday, 14 July 2006 23:29
Uh-Oh, Sounds like Jayne's thinking mutiny (Jayne's Thinking!!! Now that is a scary thought!) and it also looks like the Baddies just blewup the Cryobank when they left. The writting may be getting dark, but your our guiding light thru this tale, - So lead on My Fine Bard, & we will follow.

8-) Ani

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