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Antebellum - Book I: Chapter Thirteen

Friday, June 16, 2006

The thirteenth chapter in a Big Damn Sequel series. In this installment: The crew is back on the road, but it's not going to well

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A/N: The last couple times I tried to post this, my computer seemed to implode with worthlessness. So I'm a tad bit annoyed with my stupid, stupid, stupid PC as I type this. Bear with me.

In other news, two small chapters for the price of one regular-sized chapter. Hooray!

Book One – Chapter Thirteen

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The first patient Simon Tam ever lost was named Nancy Fyor.

She was 17 years old and suffering from a gunshot wound to the right leg. It would later be determined by federal officials that Nancy Fyor was selling contraband in a Black-Out zone of Osiris, which accounted for the unhurried arrival of medical transportation.

By the time, Dr. Tam, who was in his second month as resident, got to Nancy, the wound had already been infected, which then progressed into septicemia, a bacterial infection of the bloodstream. Dr. Tam was able to keep Nancy in stable condition, prescribing her with antibiotics and drotrecogin alfa. However, the infection spread to her kidneys causing critical failure. Since she was a suspected contraband dealer in a Black-Out zone, the hospital couldn’t declare her insured for an emergency surgery, nor did they really try.

Nancy Fyor died two days later.

Simon had blamed himself for the death, even though he had very little reason to do so. According to federal officials, the bullet Nancy Fyor was shot with seemed to be doused with one of many Core-produced toxins that sped up the septicemia. She didn’t have a chance.

Nevertheless, Dr. Tam, being young and a bit too proud of his intellect, was unable to accept this notion. He went on to spend a large sum of his inheritance on research for an antidote for the toxin as well as training for a select group of interns to administer the remedy.

Simon often took things for granted, such as his family wealth. Also, to a greater extent, he took his intellect for granted. Five years ago, when one such strength came up short, the other seemed to b

Comments
Sunday, 18 June 2006 11:44
Wow, what a great part!

I love seeing Mal react to the things that happened on Neo Sombra (I'm so silly that only now I catch the meaning of that*name*.) and to events that we readers haven't even seen but that are vaguely starting to take shape, such as the ever conspicious "Auguine Incident". That was a very touching, very sad scene between him and Inara there. Closer than ever and more hopeless, as well.

And River. The word is.. oy.

The weather is just too hot for coherent feedback right now and I can't apologize enough, but as always I loved reading a new chapter of this series. You do wonderful things with the crew and your original characters. It's a delight.
Sunday, 18 June 2006 16:32
Oh, no, Simon better not start pushing Kaylee away!

Jayne just needed to be hit by Mal for all of his comments. They weren't helping the situation. But they were real in character for him!

The Mal/Inara conversation was chilling! If Mal is giving up...expecting to be caught....

And now the crew is flying into a trap...oy! You know how to ratchet up the tension, don't you?!

Don't keep us waiting long to find out what happens!
CALMB4THESTORM
Tuesday, 20 June 2006 23:49
"Sooner or later, we gotta stop runnin & accept fate."
That's a scary & depressing statement - Hopefully something MegaGood is coming to snap our faithful group out of the feeling of doom that has come upon them.
Beautifully written, I continue on to the next. Ani
Friday, 23 June 2006 10:36
Loved the scene between Mal and Inara, and am not sure what my feelings are about the Baron. Just how much is he going to leave Mal and company hanging as the noose tightens? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 24 June 2006 03:40
Oh...you gotta know something's up when Mal's the voice of logic and Inara's trying to argue the faith route...even piss-poorly;)

Things are definitely down for our BDHs.....but I know there's an upside coming soon. Right, TSB?

BEB

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