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Night Terrors

Sunday, January 15, 2006

Not all monsters are found in nightmares.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3381    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: Night Terrors

Author: Ana Sedai

Rating: PG

Character(s): Mal, River

Prompt: 042 - Monsters

Word Count: 815

A/N: Ninth in my Joss100 Mal/River series. I know I have to start writing these faster!

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Mal was not a heavy sleeper. Years of war and hard living had left him with an overdeveloped sense of hearing, and any little noise that penetrated the walls of his bunk also tended to penetrate his shut-eye. This was occasionally a problem, as when Simon and Kaylee got a bit, er, vocal in her bunk, but overall he was thankful for it. His hearing sounds in the night had saved their asses on more than one occasion.

So when the sound of breaking glass snapped his eyes open, he made sure his gun was in its holster before he left his bunk. Early had been a hard lesson learned.

He headed for the kitchen, tiptoeing a little bit, and poked his head around the corner. He saw River kneeling on the floor, picking up the remains of a cup and saucer. It looked like she hadn’t even been able to start the tea before the accident. Her back was to him, but he could still see her graceful movements as she handled the shards.

“Not polite to spy, you know.”

She said this without turning around, and suddenly Mal felt a mite guilty, then a mite annoyed. He stepped fully into the kitchen. “It’s my gorram ship. I hear something break, I go check it out.”

River didn’t answer. She finished cleaning up, rose to her feet, and dumped the pieces into the trash, all without facing him. Great, now he’d hurt her feelings. Head down, she made to leave, but Mal caught her hand before she could go. Gently, he asked, “Albatross, what’s the matter? Why’re you up so late?”

Finally, she lifted her face, and Mal caught his breath. Her eyes were full of stark, raving terror. Okay, now he was scared. “River, you gotta tell me what’s goin’ on.”

Biting her lip, she answered simply. “Monsters. They won’t be quiet. I hear them when I sleep, when I’m awa

Comments
Sunday, 15 January 2006 00:44
Nice.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 15 January 2006 01:35
Mal is an evil, lecherous hump.

<Significant glances. Incessant laughter>
Sunday, 15 January 2006 01:49
Loved this and so wonderful to see you posting here Ana, I have read and loved so many of your pieces of fic on Firefly Glow. I hope you write more River and Mal. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 15 January 2006 07:15
Really great peice you've written here. Makes sense with those two as well.

Luc

I write fic. It's what I do.
Sunday, 15 January 2006 18:32
YAY!!! I was afraid that you had the dreaded writer's block! Very glad to see you postin' again. I love your fic! Keep 'em comin'!
Monday, 16 January 2006 12:50
I like this, River feeling the monsters and Mal comforting her. Great stuff.
Monday, 16 January 2006 18:48
"I don’t care what it takes. They will not have you."
aww, feelin' a lil' misty-eyed here...

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ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 17 January 2006 00:26
I just went back and read all nine of these after reading this one...and all I can say is...wow.

Mal/River. I never thought of it before...but this is so realitic and in character and...awesome!
Tuesday, 17 January 2006 23:47
Nice work!
I wish you'd slowed the dialogue just a bit more when Mal first comes into the kitchen, but when he tells her that they'll never get her back, I wanted to cheer!

The dragon analogy was very good. Great imagery in so few words.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 24 January 2006 09:24
Glad to see you writing again. You write Mal and River like no one else can, and I am all for it! I love Mal and River together and I always look for your stories first. Keep up the wonderful writing and am looking forward to more Mal/River.
Dancer
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 29 January 2006 01:39
While I am a sucker for Mal/Inara I got a happy glow off this one... mal seems more like a father or older brother figure in this story... but hey, it also could be lover thing goin on too, never really thought of this one, but still great piece of writing, give me more! :)
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 31 January 2006 12:25
Good River characterization. Liked the story... Any M/R is welcome.

PS, what's yr ajah? ;)
ANA
Tuesday, 31 January 2006 12:29
Ah, another WoT fan! Looking forward to the last one, too? Looks like '07's gonna be a big year for the fantasy book crowd. I'd like to think of myself as a Blue, but I'm much closer to a Brown's temperament.

Also, to everyone who's reviewed, thank you so much for your support. I'm glad I'm able to make this rather unusual pairing more plausible.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 18 March 2006 16:27
mal river is good keep it up cause your an execellent writer
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 15 April 2006 20:10
Shiny:)

Excellent story. I just love mal\river;)

Looking forward to the next story...

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