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Antebellum - Book I: Chapter Five

Wednesday, January 11, 2006

The Fifth Chapter in a Big Damn Sequel series. In this installment: Someone better start stirring the plot, 'cause it's startin' to thicken.

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Book One – Chapter Five

Huh. How long has that been there?

Simon stared intently at the small, silver scar on his cheek. It was only about two inches long. Maybe even an inch and a half. Through the mirror, he looked different, but he chalked it up to the smudges on the glass. He pressed his finger against the shallow groove the scar created and tried to think back to a time when something cut him enough to cause scarring. Honestly, that could have been any number of events.

It troubled him very slightly when he found scars on his body from wounds he never remembered receiving. Two on his back. One on his right shin. Three on his chest. One on his stomach. One on his left thigh. One on his face. This new one made two on his face, eight total. He often wondered if Kaylee noticed. He was sure she did.

He was mostly sure of this because of how he noticed the new scars on her body. Finding those scars troubled him more. She had one across the knuckles on her right hand. One on her left calf. Two on her hip. One on her stomach. Three small puncture scars on her neck. And one on the back of her head, covered up by her dark hair. She wanted that one hidden from the rest of the crew, so Simon did some world-class stitching without shaving that part of her head. He was happy to oblige to her wishes.

Nine total.

He dabbed his bleeding lip with a wet towel. It kept bleeding, so he put a small bandage on it. He rubbed the scar one more time. He must have cut himself shaving one morning and just forgot about it.

Kaylee had been avoiding him ever since they left Three Hills. She was upset, but something like that didn’t take serious deducing skills. Everyone felt it when Kaylee wasn’t smiling anymore. But Simon felt it the most. He didn’t know it at the time, but he did. He felt it so much that trying to make her smile was more of a selfish act of his own than a service to Kaylee. But sometimes he just couldn’t do it anymore. She’d still physically smile, showing h

Comments
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 16:47
Wow...wow that was amazing i did not see that coming at all. Great way to end the chapter i cant wait for the next.
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 20:20
whoa.

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Thursday, 12 January 2006 00:26
"this moment here is the calm..."

A truism of the Verse since the BigBang.
And a most excellent cliff hanger.
Lead on my fine bard your plot quickens.
And we await your next installment!
Thursday, 12 January 2006 18:13
Whoa, plot!!

I loved it very much, all of it. From Simon's quietly observant disquiet to Mal's sad and desperate un-plan to the as of yet unlocked mystery of what exactly is making Inara's plan so outrageous. (Yay, Inara had a plan!)

Then Zoe's confrontation was painful and wonderful, cutting straight to the heart of the matter, like she is supposed to with Mal.

Also, more well-written original characters. Nicolas, Chen and... the mysterious sister. Oy. Can't wait to find out more!

I love this series, it hasn't hit a single wrong note yet, and it makes me very eager for every new part!
Saturday, 06 May 2006 16:31
Ohh, sister?!? Now that wasn't what I was expecting!

And what are these scars that Simon and Kaylee have? And why can't he remember getting them? Is there some plot here that hasn't been explained yet?
Sunday, 07 May 2006 08:30
Another great installment! I am supposed to be sleeping but instead I am reading! The little spat between Kaylee and Jayne was so poitch perfect! And what was sImon goign tot say to Kaylee?!!! Great Job!

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