Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Pieces: Ch 64-75.

Tuesday, January 10, 2006

Sometimes pieces fit, sometimes they don't and sometimes they can't be put back together. Sixth installment for the Joss_100. Jayne and Kaylee.

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Prompt #064: Ocean.

Word Count: 620.

RIPTIDES.

There was a very fine line between helpless and helpful, she knew it. When Jayne first woke her up, she was the former, breath tight in her lungs and sweat beading on her skin, her mind a mix of images that she couldn't stand. Had made good and sure over the last year that she wouldn't have to stand.

Sometimes she choked on it, how easily that could be ripped away and she ended up cringing behind Jayne or someone else. Nothin' but the bitty girl they used to tease her about being. Sometime after Early they'd stopped, didn't make fun of her being too girly to stand up for herself, but she still heard the words.

With the appearance of Mal and the knowledge they were alone and relatively safe, she'd slipped right into the latter. Intruders that wanted a fight she couldn't deal with. Engines that stopped working, that was her specialty, th

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LVS2READ
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 03:10
Nooo, you can't leave us hanging there!

Another fantastic set! Can't wait 'til the next ones. Will they really be the end?

"I love my captain."
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 04:52
I've never really considered this couple. But you have pulled it off and a lot more. Their relationship is amazing and so true to the characters. Can't wait!
BOOKADDICT
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 12:05
Oh no, don't leave it there.
I love the whole series. The characters voices are so right. Can't wait for the next 25.

"It was gravel and sand, his voice, everything that cracked her open."
Lovely
CANTONHEROINE
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 15:21
Oh God! And I thought it was a cliffhanger last time! Aargh!

Stupid Simon. Stupid Dart-flinging Kidnapping Guys. Don't let our wayward babes get hurt.

More ASAP! ;P
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 15:37
More- you are evil!!! and great.
HUMBUG
Friday, 13 January 2006 10:35
This is so shiny, Jacqui!!!

..aw..Jayne & Kaylee saying i love you..

..no, Kaylee, don't do that with Simon..

...*gasp* Jayne sees Kaylee with Simon..

....oh no, Jayne & Kaylee fighting......

....Jayne & Kaylee captured!!!!.......

Don't leave us waiting too long until the next part...........
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 04:28
What a twist - and you're right - it wouldn't be something easy for Jayne (or anyone) to just forget.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 04:31
Ooops - that last comment was for the next set, where I'll also post it. Forgive!

For this set, you've done a nice job of bringing us back from the comedy of the previous selections to the drama of this one.

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