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Bed and Wine: Part 6

Saturday, January 7, 2006

A certain former companion is not having her best weekend ever. Our favorite heroes play at being married, and the mystery deepens. Serenity *spoilers.*

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Bed and Wine: Part 6

By Kaynara

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A certain former companion is not having her best weekend ever. Our favorite heroes play at being married, and the mystery deepens. Serenity *spoilers.*

It's Joss's verse--I just borrow it.

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Accustomed now to her daughter’s cries, Zoe woke immediately, rolled out of bed and approached the cradle where Raven slept.

“It belonged to my Ella,” Caroline had explained, as Zoe hefted the small brass piece down from the attic, carried it over by the bed.

“And how old’s your baby girl now?” Zoe asked, watching Caroline bounce Raven lightly in her arms.

“She’d have been eleven this winter.”

Zoe nodded and they left it at that.

Now Zoe knelt on the floor, lifted her fretting little girl and curled the warm, squirming body against her chest. Carrying her to the bed, she lay the baby out beside her, unbuttoning the Hawaiian shirt she used for a nightgown. Twice already tonight, but Zoe didn’t mind...didn’t mind much, anyway. She appreciated this time together, these quiet moments late at night, even if in the morning her eyes would be blurry, her brain fuzzy from lack of sleep.

“You know, Baby Girl. Your daddy was always one for midnight snacks.” She glanced at the clock by her bed. More like two in the AM.

She sighed, stroked a finger over the baby’s cheek, marveling at the way her tiny lips moved.

“Your daddy would just adore you to pieces. He’d show you off somethin’ crazy, tellin’ anybody’d listen that his baby girl was prettiest in the ‘verse. ’Spect he wouldn’t be wrong.”

Zoe yawned, let her eyes flutter shut for a moment. She’d been dreaming before the baby cried out in the night. Lately she dreamt often, good dreams that stayed with her when she woke. If she let herself, she could visualize him now, sitting at the foot of the bed, watching her feed their baby.

“Husband?” she murmured sleepily.

“I’m here, Sweetie. Watching over my girls....”

Zoe closed her eyes again, serene beneath his watchful gaze.

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Jayne stomped

Comments
Saturday, 07 January 2006 21:06
Ooooh, this is getting good. You're building to something great, and I can't wait to discover what the Evil Mastermind Plot (tm) turns out to be. And when oh when are Mal and Inara getting back to the old bump 'n grind? You've captured their relationship so well, and I can't wait until they're able to get past their misgivings and doubts and seize some happiness. And River...we must soon have resolution on River.

I can't wait for the next part!
Saturday, 07 January 2006 22:46
*big big big eyes*

ooo, must continue. Evil plans? mwhaha, i love a plot like this

fav line:

We ain’t been married a week and already she’s talkin’ divorce

funny...sounds like somethin likely to happen between those two ;)
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 07 January 2006 22:52
LOVE long chapters! Please give us more soon... k?
Saturday, 07 January 2006 22:53
Wow, I am all kinds of worried for Mal and Inara. I'm thinking they are trying to breed the next generation of compliant folk or some such. Creepy people. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 07 January 2006 23:40
Don't be so modest, Kaynara. We're definitely fans of yours!
Saturday, 07 January 2006 23:50
Great job. I cant wait for the next chapter.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 08 January 2006 00:04
Ewwww. These plotting guys sound creepy. Keep it comin'.
Sunday, 08 January 2006 00:06
^^^^ That was me up there.
Sunday, 08 January 2006 00:28
Gideon is really starting to grow on me. Sure, protecting River would be his job, but I imagine he announced that he would be throughly distracted for as long as it took River to make that call. And I almost feel sorry for Jayne. It's hard taking notes when you don't have a frickin' clue!
Sunday, 08 January 2006 01:19
You've got me totally intrigued with the whole Dominique thing...and I can't wait to find out what Blue Sun is up to. Great chapter :)
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 08 January 2006 02:05
Wow, it's all gotten so mysterious! Can't wait to get more. Glad to see some more Jayne in there!
squish

p.s. definitely a fan of yours! oh yeah, and of that Joss guy too.
2X2
Sunday, 08 January 2006 03:21
This is excellent! Poor Mal and Inara, interrupted for a dawn horseback ride.. I bet Inara's legs are killin' her!!! Something nasty nasty goin' on with ol' Blue Sun... and despite Inara thinking Trevor won't sell them out, I've got my doubts... and VERY curious to know exactly what Nisque is the root of, in terms of Inara leavin Sihnon... very mysterious!
keep it up!!!
Sunday, 08 January 2006 03:34
Your series always gives me the warm and fuzzies. I don't think you always hit the spot characterisation-wise, but who cares? They're getting it on!

I love how you find all sorts of ways (some cheesy, others just plain clever)to interrupt the sex...it hooks me.

Also, I'm loving the independent River arc. No one else is doing that. And your Washburn-clan is just lovely.

Thanks
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 08 January 2006 04:37
I LOVE this series!

Thankyou!!! :D
Sunday, 08 January 2006 04:52
Great episode. Love the Mal and Inara sparring, can't those two just get along? They never seem to catch a break do they? Love the scene between Zoe and Mal's sister, that's exactly how I'd imagine Zoe to respond, just a simple nod. Glad to see you're working Blue Sun into the story. They were such an interesting part of the series you just know they would have become more and more involved in the BDH's lives had the show continued. Can't wait for the next part. I don't want this story to end.
Sunday, 08 January 2006 05:35
I AM A KAYNARA FAN! Love your story love what you do with the characters even if sometimes i think your a bit off on the voices. but you being off on the voices is a way of makeign them yours, but still them. did that make any sence out side of my head? probibly not... still i am a fan keep it up.
GOODDUCK
Sunday, 08 January 2006 07:01
Very excited to see where this is heading! I feel like your story has slowed down in a good way - allowing plots and characters time to develop. This time on Shadow has been good in so many ways.

I rave about your work to anyone I know who loves Serenity so I think that makes me a Kaynara fan too!
Sunday, 08 January 2006 18:36
*wears "i'm a kaynara fan" shirt* go kaynara! go kaynara!

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ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 08 January 2006 22:17
Omg what a great chapter!!! Mal and Inara are still so incredibly cute!!

So excited about this new storyline with evil plots and blue sun!

Keep it coming!! *puts on her 'I'm a Kaynara fan' shirt*
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 22 January 2006 22:29
no, definitely your fan. and joss's, but yours alone too.
Friday, 10 February 2006 20:36
I'm still reading through them, but I kinda had to stop here for a few things. First, unfortunately, a few nits.

"A companion must never look appear than perfection." That is a somewhat discordant sentence. I'm thinking you meant it to read 'A companion must never appear to look like less than perfection.'

And Jayne's quote, “My drunk?” should probably be "'My drunk?" or possibly ''M I drunk?" to help stop any momentary confusion on the part of your readers who may (as I did) wonder just who Jayne's drunk was and was he thinking he was gonna get lucky yet again.

Please, don't think I didn't like this chapter, I did like it. It's just when I find things like this, it kinda takes my focus out of the story, which I think you'd like to avoid.

I like where you've been going here (heck my mind's been thinking some of this--the long term River/Blue Sun stuff) since the BDM and I'm enjoying reading someone playing with those scary ideas. I'm looking foward to reading more. :-)
WINTERHART
Tuesday, 14 February 2006 04:07
Oh no sweetie...we're your fans too :)

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