Bed and Wine: Part 6
By Kaynara
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A certain former companion is not having her best weekend ever. Our favorite heroes play at being married, and the mystery deepens. Serenity *spoilers.*
It's Joss's verse--I just borrow it.
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Accustomed now to her daughter’s cries, Zoe woke immediately, rolled out of bed and approached the cradle where Raven slept.
“It belonged to my Ella,” Caroline had explained, as Zoe hefted the small brass piece down from the attic, carried it over by the bed.
“And how old’s your baby girl now?” Zoe asked, watching Caroline bounce Raven lightly in her arms.
“She’d have been eleven this winter.”
Zoe nodded and they left it at that.
Now Zoe knelt on the floor, lifted her fretting little girl and curled the warm, squirming body against her chest. Carrying her to the bed, she lay the baby out beside her, unbuttoning the Hawaiian shirt she used for a nightgown. Twice already tonight, but Zoe didn’t mind...didn’t mind much, anyway. She appreciated this time together, these quiet moments late at night, even if in the morning her eyes would be blurry, her brain fuzzy from lack of sleep.
“You know, Baby Girl. Your daddy was always one for midnight snacks.” She glanced at the clock by her bed. More like two in the AM.
She sighed, stroked a finger over the baby’s cheek, marveling at the way her tiny lips moved.
“Your daddy would just adore you to pieces. He’d show you off somethin’ crazy, tellin’ anybody’d listen that his baby girl was prettiest in the ‘verse. ’Spect he wouldn’t be wrong.”
Zoe yawned, let her eyes flutter shut for a moment. She’d been dreaming before the baby cried out in the night. Lately she dreamt often, good dreams that stayed with her when she woke. If she let herself, she could visualize him now, sitting at the foot of the bed, watching her feed their baby.
“Husband?” she murmured sleepily.
“I’m here, Sweetie. Watching over my girls....”
Zoe closed her eyes again, serene beneath his watchful gaze.
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Jayne stomped
I can't wait for the next part!
ooo, must continue. Evil plans? mwhaha, i love a plot like this
fav line:
We ain’t been married a week and already she’s talkin’ divorce
funny...sounds like somethin likely to happen between those two ;)
You can't take the sky from me
squish
p.s. definitely a fan of yours! oh yeah, and of that Joss guy too.
keep it up!!!
I love how you find all sorts of ways (some cheesy, others just plain clever)to interrupt the sex...it hooks me.
Also, I'm loving the independent River arc. No one else is doing that. And your Washburn-clan is just lovely.
Thanks
Thankyou!!! :D
I rave about your work to anyone I know who loves Serenity so I think that makes me a Kaynara fan too!
So excited about this new storyline with evil plots and blue sun!
Keep it coming!! *puts on her 'I'm a Kaynara fan' shirt*
"A companion must never look appear than perfection." That is a somewhat discordant sentence. I'm thinking you meant it to read 'A companion must never appear to look like less than perfection.'
And Jayne's quote, “My drunk?” should probably be "'My drunk?" or possibly ''M I drunk?" to help stop any momentary confusion on the part of your readers who may (as I did) wonder just who Jayne's drunk was and was he thinking he was gonna get lucky yet again.
Please, don't think I didn't like this chapter, I did like it. It's just when I find things like this, it kinda takes my focus out of the story, which I think you'd like to avoid.
I like where you've been going here (heck my mind's been thinking some of this--the long term River/Blue Sun stuff) since the BDM and I'm enjoying reading someone playing with those scary ideas. I'm looking foward to reading more. :-)
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