Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Best Deceptions: Ch 4

Saturday, January 7, 2006

Oh what a tangled web we weave... Oh, you know the drill. Questions and answers and truths abide. Jayne/Kaylee.

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Part four: the third night and the start of the fourth day.

This was getting to be a very long chapter, as is, so I've split this day up. It just means more chapters.

Disclaimer: At this point, Joss can claim Jayne, Kaylee and the crew. He probably wouldn't want to claim the rest, but they're mine anyway.

Rated: There's very little here, but I'll call it PG, maybe.

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"Hey Ma." Jayne came to stand next to them, taking the cloth out of the woman's hand. "Why don't you go sit down? Kaylee'n me'll finish up here."

Kaylee smiled down into the sink. He'd given her time, gave her space all the way through dinner without making it obvious. Maybe the twins had gotten good since she was gone. Or maybe it was something he'd figured out for himself.

He took the next plate from her hand without blinking.

"I wanted to ask you somethin' before." He started and she breathed in to steady herself. "But now I don't."

The air went out of her lungs and she couldn't help herself from looking up at him, trying to figure out what he was gonna say from his eyes alone. They weren't much help.

"I got things to say, Kaylee, an I want you to listen to 'em, but I don't want nothin' back. Okay? I don't want nothin' from you, 'cept for you not to laugh."

"Jayne." She plunged her hand back in the water. "I wouldn't..."

"But people do. I ain't smart, I know it, don't ever pretend to be, but it seems whenever I try and be serious 'bout stuff, there's people laughin' at me for it. The captain, Wash, Zoe." He paused. "

Comments
BOOKADDICT
Saturday, 07 January 2006 12:22
Great continuation. I love Kaylee's family.
"And she kinda wanted to enjoy him all to herself right now, all muscles and smiles just for her" my favourite line. And who can blame her?
HUMBUG
Saturday, 07 January 2006 12:49
MMMMMMmmmmmm, lovely, Jacqui!!

So they finally admitted having feelings for each other.

I like how you didn't have them jumping into bed and having sex straight away....

It'll be good to see how this relationship develops, and what has happened by the time the rest of the crew get there...... And how Mal, Simon and the others react to it.............

Will Jayne ask about Stephen?.... and how will Kaylee respond?...... and the rest of her family??.........

Keep writing, Jacqui!! This story is going real well!!!
CANTONHEROINE
Saturday, 07 January 2006 14:05
I'm stratchin' my head tryin' to figure how you manage to churn out so much fiction - and of such high quality, too! Here's me, scratching away at the second chapter of my ONLY fic, and you're producing work like this. Might make a person resentful, if it weren't so gorram shiny. ;P

I love it, of course. (*scoffs* As if there were any doubt!). And I'm dying to know how the rest of the crew are going to react to developments. More soon, please.
BELLONA
Saturday, 07 January 2006 18:12
“Well ain’t that cute? Man thinks he’s getting a cut.”
hee!!! and YAY!!!! they FINALLY admitted how they felt!!!! this is good day, a good, good day...

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ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 17:17
Thank you for this! I like all of your fics, but this is definitely the cutest one yet - but not in a plotless fluffy way like other cute fics.
I wasn't a big fan of Jaylee-fics at first - congratulations, you made me change my mind (and who is Simon anyway?)
AMELIAP
Saturday, 14 January 2006 11:12
Anonymous (212.243.23.52) was me- forgot to login again-
I just thought I'd give additional feedback here to show you that you haven't lost one of your readers and that it is of course still great and more please, more!
Yep, you're responsible for turning me into a Jaylee-fan - I hope you are aware of the consequences ;)
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 19 January 2006 04:26
i need more i love the stroy so far write mor please
REXJAYNE
Saturday, 21 January 2006 14:15
Ok please finish this one? I've been patient.. well. I'm trying to be.

I looove it. It's the perfect way to get them together.

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