Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Pieces: Ch 51-63.

Friday, January 6, 2006

Sometimes pieces fit, sometimes they don't and sometimes they can't be put back together. Fifth installment for the Joss_100. Jayne and Kaylee.

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Prompt #051: Destruction.

Word Count: 196.

SAYING GOODBYE.

"I can't watch."

"You want this or not?" Kaylee sighed. "Last chance to say no."

She couldn't help it, his bottom lip just pouted out and it was too tempting not to reach out and touch it. Soft, soft lip, surrounded by thick, bristly whiskers. He kept his eyes screwed shut.

"Do it." But he was already wincing and she hadn't even begun yet. "I said so, didn't I? Just... I can't watch."

"Okay then. Here goes."

She reached her hand out.

"Wait!"

"Come on, Jayne." She sighed. "This was your idea. Yay or nay?"

"Um..." For a second he sounded as if he might change his mind and she kinda expected him to. "Okay, I'm ready, I can take it. Go on."

"We don't have to do it, you know."

"Yeah." He opened his eyes and smiled at her, just about melting her heart. "We do."

Then he clamped them shut again.

"One." She reached out and he didn't move.

"Two." She hooked her fingers behind it. He still didn't move.

"Three!"

The paper ripped easily as she tore it from the wall and soon his bunk was littered with scraps of half naked ladies.

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Prompt #052: Apoc

Comments
HUMBUG
Saturday, 07 January 2006 00:23
You put a great big smile on my face when I saw you had posted another fanfic. Thanks, Jacqui!

You know I love Jaylee fanfic, but I think this series is so lovely - just seeing how Jayne and Kaylee fit together as a long- term couple, and with the other members of the crew. And seeing how they react to the every day events of being on Serenity.

I like how Kaylee can convince Jayne to do anything for her, no matter how much he doesn't want to do it, just to make her happy. Jayne and Kaylee dancing. Squeeeeeee! and Kaylee and Jayne kissing and cuddling. Double squeeeeee!!!!

Keep going. This series of wonderful!! Well, alll your sereies are wonderful. Just keep wriitng lots of fanfic - especially about Kaylee & Jayne!!!
AMDOBELL
Saturday, 07 January 2006 01:44
This was hi-larious! And I loved the fun Zoe and Mal had over Jayne and the sheep, then Jayne of all people giving Mal advice on women? Priceless, especially with him not wanting to dance with Kaylee -duh! Lots of fine moments. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
LVS2READ
Saturday, 07 January 2006 02:57
I was so happy to see that you posted this next set! They are, as always, wonderful. Jayne & Kaylee are so cute together, and you make them totally believable. Don't leave us hanging too long for the next set!

"I love my captain."
ZOESBACKUP
Saturday, 07 January 2006 03:45
really nice flow between scenes. I love how naturally you have brought each character into the story without it seeming forced. awesome work! I can't wait for the next installment!
BOOKADDICT
Saturday, 07 January 2006 12:02
"She could sleep in the roar of all his sounds." I love this line. The story just gets better and better. There are so many good parts, I especially like the ripping of the pictures and the bar fight.
CANTONHEROINE
Saturday, 07 January 2006 13:40
I was all "ooh" and "awww" and "ha ha ha", then I got to the end, and it was "oh, no".
What did you do to our beloved ship?
Kaylee's gonna fix it, right?
Right?
*sighs and settles in to wait (im)patiently for next installment*
;P
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 04:26
Ha - Zoe dropped her gun! Such fun. And I loved that Kaylee ripped down his skank pics.

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