The Best Deceptions: Ch 3
Thursday, December 29, 2005
Oh what a tangled web we weave, when first we practice to deceive. (Jayne/Kaylee).
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 3932 RATING: 9.0 (G) SERIES: FIREFLY
Third part, third day. What possible trouble can they get into?
Disclaimer: At this point, Joss can claim Jayne and Kaylee. He probably wouldn't want to claim the rest, but they're mine anyway.
Rated: There's very little here, but I'll call it PG, maybe.
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Parts: and . *** CHAPTER THREE. Jayne crept into the room softly. It was damned cold, had been for the past few hours he'd been waiting outside. He could see her shape in the half dark and smiled as he leaned down close to her. "Kaylee?" He placed his hands on the side of the mattress. "Mm?" Her eye lids twitched a little. "Kaylee?" He whispered it again, close to her face now. "You awake, Kaylee?" "Huh?" She blinked slowly and focused on him. "Oh, Jayne." "Yeah. It's me." He gripped the mattress and pulled up, effectively tipping her onto the floor. "An' I'm cold. It's my turn on the bed tonight." *** "Auntie Lee?" A small voice woke her up. Kaylee frowned as she felt the crick in her neck. The floor was a damned uncomfortable place to sleep. She opened her eyes to see Lilly's face peering at her from over the bed. "Morning." She stretched herself out and sat up. "Isn't it early?" "Nope." Jayne grinned at her from his position, quite comfortable, on top of the bed. "Not if you can hear that squallin'." And there it was, Ivy could be heard through the walls. A loud, insistent wail which sounded like she had worked up some steam and wasn't going to stop anytime soon. "You slept on the floor last night?" Lilly blinked, confused. "Yeah." She pulled herself up to a standing position. "I ro..." "Rolled, I know." Lilly shrugged. "I walked in on momma and daddy rolling once and now I have to knock." *** "Here." Ma
I like this story and where it's going.
I LOVE this story. Have I mentioned that before? I think I have. Bears repeating, though.
Mick and Mike double-teaming our muddle-headed couple is great, hopefully they can get them to see what's going on under their gorram noses. Nana's prodding of Jayne worked a treat, too.
Honestly, I think Kaylee needs a good slap upside the head, and Jayne... *double deep sigh* He's so good with Ivy. Just that image of our big man being all gentle with a tiny baby, gets me...right...there. ;P
MORE SOON!
I've just been away for a few days and I come back to this loveliness!!!
Keep going, Jacqui, it's fabulous!!
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that's freakin beautiful
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