Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL
And so the second part brings the second day.
A/N: For those who wanted to know why Simon wasn't chosen, please be patient and let the story unfold at its own leisure. I believe the edict is: show, don't tell.
Disclaimer: The ones you've seen, they're Joss'. The ones you haven't, they're mine.
Rated: This one is PG, it's a little more frisky.
Feedback: Is so very shiny. I love it all. Give it me, give it me good. Comment or email: wily_one24@yahoo.com.au
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Comments
Friday, 23 December 2005 12:30
I love it! I can't wait to see where it's going!
Who's SM? Hope to find out soon.
Who's SM? Hope to find out soon.
Friday, 23 December 2005 12:34
I'm loving this story, Jacqui!!
Jayne & Kaylee are just perfect for one another. The question is how long will it take them to work out that it's not just an act they're putting on......
Get the next part out as soon as you can!! I can hardly wait!!!!!
Jayne & Kaylee are just perfect for one another. The question is how long will it take them to work out that it's not just an act they're putting on......
Get the next part out as soon as you can!! I can hardly wait!!!!!
Friday, 23 December 2005 12:44
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story.
Except for the fact that Kaylee seems to have her priorities all wrong. Hell, don't get mad, girl, just GET SOME! ;P
(Or even better - give some)*snort*
I hope she gets Jayne for Xmas, if not, I'll take him.
More soon, please.
Except for the fact that Kaylee seems to have her priorities all wrong. Hell, don't get mad, girl, just GET SOME! ;P
(Or even better - give some)*snort*
I hope she gets Jayne for Xmas, if not, I'll take him.
More soon, please.
Friday, 23 December 2005 15:02
Well now I'm trying to picture a gesture that can mean both "I'm really sorry," and, "I'm going to buy you a dog!" Great character development in this.
Friday, 23 December 2005 15:29
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
Naughty Jayne! You're getting coal for Christmas.
Or maybe Kaylee. All depends on how well you work an apology.
*giggle*
I ADORE!
Naughty Jayne! You're getting coal for Christmas.
Or maybe Kaylee. All depends on how well you work an apology.
*giggle*
I ADORE!
RAVENJASMINE
Friday, 23 December 2005 17:41
Great chapter! I can't wait to see how Jayne 'evens the score' with Kaylee for that one :)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 December 2005 17:46
loved the twins 'translating' from afar! chuckle.
love this story
love this story
Friday, 23 December 2005 21:15
SHINY!!!! Please continue cause it makes me happy and bouncy! Jayne is so swai!
Saturday, 24 December 2005 20:47
was laughing all the way through the fireside conversation...so funny
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p.s. extremely minor thing here, but jayne is a hero IN canton. canton is a town on higgin's moon
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p.s. extremely minor thing here, but jayne is a hero IN canton. canton is a town on higgin's moon
AMELIAP
Sunday, 25 December 2005 13:28
Just loving this- can't decide whether I want this to come to an end fairly soon or whether I want those two to continue their 'charade', because they are just too cute...
Your characters are very convincing (Mick and Mike are great OCs) and your sense of humour is- shiny.
Am looking forward to your next chapter
Your characters are very convincing (Mick and Mike are great OCs) and your sense of humour is- shiny.
Am looking forward to your next chapter
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 30 December 2005 01:44
i love this story, it is greatness. absolute greatness.
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