Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Best Deceptions: Ch2

Friday, December 23, 2005

Oh what a tangled web we weave, when first we practice to deceive. (Jayne/Kaylee).

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3409    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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And so the second part brings the second day.

A/N: For those who wanted to know why Simon wasn't chosen, please be patient and let the story unfold at its own leisure. I believe the edict is: show, don't tell.

Disclaimer: The ones you've seen, they're Joss'. The ones you haven't, they're mine.

Rated: This one is PG, it's a little more frisky.

Feedback: Is so very shiny. I love it all. Give it me, give it me good. Comment or email: wily_one24@yahoo.com.au

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CHAPTER TWO.

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She led him back to the table and collapsed into the seat with breathless laughter. Jayne figured, with all these people, he was gonna have to resort to the tried and true method of talking to people without actually saying their names.

He gave one last look back at the other tables.

"Don't you know any girls from when you were young?"

She laughed.

"Not your kinda girls." Was that a wink, did she just wink at him? "What's the matter, you feelin' jealous?"

He took the opportunity to run his finger over the top her hand as it rested on the table, her smile faltered only a second and he watched the way her eyes flickered down to it and back up to grin across the table.

"It's like I never left! Mick, you didn't tell me Billy Wu got married to little Jai-Anne!"

"That's old news." He shrugged it off. "'Sides, what do you care now?"

Jayne let his hand linger just a second longer over hers before letting go and reaching into the middle of the table to begin heaping food onto a plate. He felt eyes on him from all directions.

"Here." He set the full plate down in front of Kaylee. "You ain't stopped for more'n five minutes all day, so sit down and quit yer yammerin' until you eat somethin'."

"Thank you." Her eyes lit up as he swiped her empty plate away and looked over the offerings on the table. He pretended not to notice the feel of her head leaning against his shoulder for

Comments
Friday, 23 December 2005 12:30
I love it! I can't wait to see where it's going!
Who's SM? Hope to find out soon.
Friday, 23 December 2005 12:34
I'm loving this story, Jacqui!!

Jayne & Kaylee are just perfect for one another. The question is how long will it take them to work out that it's not just an act they're putting on......

Get the next part out as soon as you can!! I can hardly wait!!!!!
Friday, 23 December 2005 12:44
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story.
Except for the fact that Kaylee seems to have her priorities all wrong. Hell, don't get mad, girl, just GET SOME! ;P
(Or even better - give some)*snort*
I hope she gets Jayne for Xmas, if not, I'll take him.
More soon, please.
Friday, 23 December 2005 15:02
Well now I'm trying to picture a gesture that can mean both "I'm really sorry," and, "I'm going to buy you a dog!" Great character development in this.
Friday, 23 December 2005 15:29
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

Naughty Jayne! You're getting coal for Christmas.

Or maybe Kaylee. All depends on how well you work an apology.

*giggle*

I ADORE!
RAVENJASMINE
Friday, 23 December 2005 17:41
Great chapter! I can't wait to see how Jayne 'evens the score' with Kaylee for that one :)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 December 2005 17:46
loved the twins 'translating' from afar! chuckle.

love this story
Friday, 23 December 2005 21:15
SHINY!!!! Please continue cause it makes me happy and bouncy! Jayne is so swai!
Saturday, 24 December 2005 20:47
was laughing all the way through the fireside conversation...so funny

b

p.s. extremely minor thing here, but jayne is a hero IN canton. canton is a town on higgin's moon
AMELIAP
Sunday, 25 December 2005 13:28
Just loving this- can't decide whether I want this to come to an end fairly soon or whether I want those two to continue their 'charade', because they are just too cute...
Your characters are very convincing (Mick and Mike are great OCs) and your sense of humour is- shiny.
Am looking forward to your next chapter
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 30 December 2005 01:44
i love this story, it is greatness. absolute greatness.

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