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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Fifty

Wednesday, December 21, 2005

Nyan Nyan and Johnny enjoy a light supper. Mal and Inara get a chance to hang out and exchange views on common points of interest.

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Fifty

GAMMA TEAM REMNANT -50.11

“I think we’ll be safe here for a while,” Johnny murmured as he closed the door. The corridor was empty, and this room – from what he could tell, they were in the engineering crew’s residence quarters – had been selected at random. They needed a place to hole up, catch their breath, and plan their next move. There were two spare bunks in the tiny room, and one was occupied by the wounded man, Fong. Nyan Nyan was tending to his shoulder, putting a compress on it while Fong himself searched through his first aid kit for supplies. He handed her an antiseptic spray and some tweezers, as well as his combat dagger. She raised her eyebrow.

“Wait until this starts working,” he said as he stabbed a syringe of morphine into his own leg and pushed the plunger down, “and after I pass out, dig the bullet out.” Nyan Nyan looked pale, but she nodded.

“Can you handle that?” Johnny inquired.

“I’ve been trained in first aid. I’ve never had to deal with anything this . . . invasive before . . .”

“Shoulder wounds are usually pretty easy. Not a lot of stuff you can mess up. Just bring it out the way it came it, then get the wound dressing over it.”

“Got it ready,” she acknowledged, holding up the sterile pack.

“You sure you can handle it?”

“I’m sure. Don’t worry so much,” she added with a brilliant smile.

“Sorry. I’m just used to most of the girls I know shrieking and fainting and such. Those who aren’t . . . say, is there anything I can get you? In all the fleeing for our lives and dodging bullets, I’ve neglected my duties as host.”

“I’d love something to eat,” she confessed. “It feels like I haven’t eaten in . . . a hundred years!” she said with a hysterical giggle.

Johnny joined, the insane irony providing the perfect ice-breaker. “I’ve got some very mediocre rations here, but they’re filling. Real good, stick-to-the-ribs soldier stuff.” He dug into his pack and rooted around until he came out with two foil pack

Comments
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 21:27
There had to be a punchline of sorts after all that facinating discussion, and I wasn't disappointed :)

Excellent as it always, always is!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 21:30
Excellent work, at always. You've balanced the mature stuff with the light hearted like the master writer you are. This chapter was mainly two people talking, little plot progression and yet I haven't a single complaint. I want more, something that happens alot with your writing. Fine job and fine writing
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 23:00
Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing the knock-down, drag-out fight that Mal and Inara have needed to have for a long time. Now that things are out in the open, maybe they can figure out how to be friends, at the very least.

Also, the interaction with Johnny and Nyan Nayn was too cute!
Thursday, 22 December 2005 00:01
Dude...

And they're GRAPHIC NOVELS!



Thursday, 22 December 2005 11:40
You have an extraordinary gift, my friend. I read the whole thing perched on the edge of my chair like I was watching an actual fight. ;P
Thursday, 22 December 2005 15:22
*whistles* she ripped into him, eh? More than Mal ripped into her. Think Inara won a lot points there in the Mal-'Nara tally I have in my head for this story.

torture? yeehaw...man that's sadistic of me...
Thursday, 22 December 2005 15:37
Great as always, have you considered making a mailing list for those of us who are always awaiting the next chapter?
Saturday, 24 December 2005 00:13
“Bellarophon, the Lassiter, Saffron. You, buck naked in the middle of the desert. Me saving the day. Good times.”

very VERY good times *happy memories*

“Oh, thank God! Can we please get on with the torture, now? Please?”

heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! <- again with the one-word giggle fit

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ANONYMOUS
Friday, 10 February 2006 22:13
*squeals with delight*

Genius you!

CallMeSerenity (again. I got logged out and I'm too rivited to log back in.
Monday, 03 April 2006 02:53
That was tres good. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time, either laughing or holding my breath!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 11 April 2006 10:00
5 fav lines

1. “So I recall. I also recall you had a rescue party that came for you. Any chance we could order one?”

2. “That Serenity needed more solid gold knick-knacks? I stand firmly behind that position.”


3. “Bellarophon, the Lassiter, Saffron. You, buck naked in the middle of the desert. Me saving the day. Good times.”


4. “I seem to have a free calendar. Until the torture commences, my slate is open."

and of course that priceless last line

5.“Oh, thank God!” Mal said with an exasperated sigh through his bag. “Can we please get on with the torture, now? Please?” he moaned.


All so funny and the reat is brilliant to, I just like those bits the best

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