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Unfinished Business -- Chapter Thirty-One

Thursday, January 27, 2011

The battle begins, Rachel changes plans, and River meets the politest baboon she's ever met.

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Col. Chen studied the situation map on the antique command vambrace display and saw that large sections of the internal security sensor grid were gone. Essentially everything in Prisoner Territory, and three sections above, was hidden from his view. Excellent strategy, of course, and he felt a hint of admiration for McNab. The Engineering sections were still on-line though, and if they were any indication, the Browncoats – he could not let himself think of them as “prisoners” any more – were making for several relatively unprotected sites of enormous strategic value with a great deal of determination. That would be problematic, if the battle raged too long, but for now he could safely ignore the tactical importance of them. If he controlled the tactical situation, the strategic situation would sort itself out eventually.

“Sergeant Anhauser!” he said calmly into the command frequency to the senior surviving soldier in charge of a little knot of his men who had taken refuge in a medical supply room – ostensibly more secure than any of the other rooms – and had been thus-far able to defend their position thanks to two pistols and a non-lethal riot gun. “I want you to send two men to junction box 19-244C and by-pass the security feeds from the main trunk line to the emergency line, or I’m not going to be able to see anyone sneaking up on you.”

“Uh, Colonel?” came Anhauser’s frightened voice, “I’m a security officer, I got two grunts, a horticulture tech and a supply guy, and the tech has a belly wound. I doubt any of us know how to do that,” he added.

“Challenge yourself, Sergeant,” Chen said, evenly. “It’s not brain surgery. Take the black cable out of the socket, put it into the other socket that will accept it, the one with the hao jie symbol in red. Then get back to your position. But you’re the only operatives I have in that sector, and that’s where they cut the feed.”

“Yes, Colonel, I’ll handle it,” Anhauser said, grimly. Chen had already moved on to the next tactical situation be

Comments
Thursday, 27 January 2011 19:44
Sorry for the problems, folks, but I think it's all sorted out now. Formatting issues . . .
Friday, 28 January 2011 03:43
No problem! After a hiatus in posting, parts of the how can be lost and forgotten. Just happy to have more.

The monkey king is nice. :) River needs to set him up on a planet with lots of bamboo and trees.

feelings sorry for... everyone involved here, though less so much the Alliance, since they're guilty of warcrimes. But I guess they figured they're screwed by this point anyway, and so there's no reason for them to stop now.
Friday, 28 January 2011 03:43
Monkey king and his troop
SLICK
Friday, 28 January 2011 04:01
It is so shiny to see another chapter of this story. Thanks. Have to keep Serenity flying somehow...
Sunday, 30 January 2011 04:22
Great your back. I hope you can manage to stay more active this time to finish this book and the next ten you write. :)
Thursday, 03 February 2011 02:01
Great job with this chapter. Glad to see your love for the 'verse coming through in your persistence to finish this story. Loved the irony of the rescue and the rebellion happening at the same time.
Tuesday, 08 February 2011 00:41
Glad to see you back StA! another great chapter!
Tuesday, 22 March 2011 01:35
love this novel, can't wait to see more!
Friday, 06 May 2011 01:06
If y'all have been wondering what I've been doing in my spare time, you can check it out here:

http://www.amazon.com/Prince-Tanith-Space-Viking-ebook/dp/B004Z9G3PS/ref=sr_1_16?ie=UTF8&m=AG56TWVU5XWC2&s=digital-text&qid=1304643370&sr=1-16

It's on lulu, too, but most of y'all probably have Kindle. Thought you'd like to know. And yes, I'm ready to do the next chapter now.
Monday, 27 June 2011 01:50
more more more!
FIREFLYCRACKHEAD
Monday, 08 August 2011 22:14
Just bought your book! Gonna read it this weekend as soon as I get some downtime. Please Please Please update soon!
KAYLEE123
Thursday, 22 October 2015 20:47
Thank you very much for this story, I realise you are probably not going to finish it but I wanted to say I really enjoyed it (and the other 2) :)

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