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Unfinished Business -- Chapter Twenty Five

Wednesday, July 2, 2008

Inspector Simon and Dr. Romano have a little chat, and Fate gives him a gift

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Unfinished Business

Chapter Twenty-Five

“More wine, Inspector?” Dr. Romano asked, graciously. Simon held out his glass – the vintage, if not excellent, was far superior to what he had been drinking. While wine wasn’t one of Simon’s particular upper-class fetishes, he did enjoy it, when properly arrayed with a meal. And when faced by such a poor excuse for a meal as this, it seemed doubly fulfilling. The Administrator had apologized profusely for the poor fare – barely a cut above what he had eaten daily on Serenity – and offered the wine in recompense. After meeting the incoherent sot who was “captain” of this ship, Simon needed the fortification the wine brought. It had been a five-minute interview that had given Simon every reason to have the Captain committed to a mental institution for treatment, so out of touch with reality was the old man. “I have them bring it in labeled as ‘medical supplies’. And I don’t skimp on the vintage. It almost makes up for the utter lack of cuisine in the Black.”

“This is from Ariel?” he asked, whirling the ruby liquid in his glass to see its legs.

“Yes, I have a cousin who has a small vineyard in New Tuscany. He’s an Internist, and spends his weekends tending his vines and working in the clinic he established near a blackout zone. The soil is perfect, just the right touch of magnesium, sunlight, and dirt cheap labor . . . and he gives me a family discount.”

“How fortunate for you,” Simon agreed.

“Yes, Dr. Romano is the fair-headed child of the universe,” one of the other scientists said from the far end of the table. There was more than a trace of bitterness in the man’s voice, the tone of a man doomed to a career as an underling. He wasn’t the only unhappy face among the scientific staff at the reception.

Simon had rarely seen such a sad, wrung-out group of researchers as these. Their clothes were shoddy and worn, of course, as was everything on the Suri Madron. But so were their spirits. Their demeanor ranged from outright fearfulness of his

Comments
Wednesday, 02 July 2008 15:10
Finally finished this one -- notice the way-too-much exposition? I couldn't find any way around it, and sometimes even I find it boring. More exciting parts soon.
Wednesday, 02 July 2008 16:02
Woot!

I get the first comment, wow.

And.....wow!

Love the chapter, so desperately glad to see you back up and writing again!

Yes, the exposition was long, but in all honest truth, I think it is needed, to show the developement of the storyline. Besides, rarely do you do anything without a good reason!

Love the chapter Screw, get this girl some more!

Wednesday, 02 July 2008 16:46
So glad to see more of this. And there was no way to explain this any other way than lots of exposition. Fortunately, you found ways of making it snarky, compelling and very interesting to read. Looking forward to more.
Wednesday, 02 July 2008 16:57
>are you familiar with baboons, doctor?”

>“Not outside of senior administration,” Simon said, dryly.

Bwahahaaha! Excellent!

I'm not a fan of exposition but it worked here. It was necessary. And reading about what happened gave me serious chills!

Well done.
Wednesday, 02 July 2008 19:19
Interesting set up and explination of the pax and stuff. Poor dumb Simon I have a feeling is about to blow this whole thing and throw away the advice he was given to just let River be River.
WOONSOCKET
Wednesday, 02 July 2008 21:29
Sometimes you need exposition, and your pompous Romano was great! Esp. with Simon constantly pulling him back on track.
Good to see you back.
SLICK
Thursday, 03 July 2008 03:58
Some of us like the exposition. We call it plot development. It takes the place of uninterrupted violence! Of course if its Jayne exercising Vera, violence can be enteretainin'.

Glad to read you back, Screw.
Monday, 07 July 2008 04:33
Nice to see you back in the saddle! No worries about exposition,some of us need to be reminded of the subtle plot twists you hide in your posts...

Nicely played.. now keep them coming!!

Keep flyin',

K

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