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Unfinished Business -- Chapter Twenty-Nine

Tuesday, October 7, 2008

A whole lotta folks get ready to do a whole lotta stuff.

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Unfinished Business

Chapter Twenty Nine

Rachel slunk through the dimly lit corridors of the Suri Madron like a shadow, her special stealth “ninja suit” helping her avoid detection. She didn’t really even need to bother with it – this level was restricted access, only Alliance personnel, and damn few of them around at that. In the half-hour she had been sneaking around, she had seen one bored guard and one flustered technician – and three or four monkeys.

The monkeys had observed her, no doubt catching her scent, but they didn’t seem terribly excited about her presence. She had been a bit unnerved by them, but she knew this was a lab ship. They were probably specimens or pets. Either way, since they didn’t deter her or obstruct her, she ignored them and focused on her mission. They watched her pass with casual interest and went about their own business.

After skulking around in the shadows she finally closed in on the control junction box on this level. It was unguarded, of course – who guards a non-descript access panel? -- and unlocked, so popping the cover off was child’s play. She hooked up the screen she carried and started in.

If this had been an Alliance-built ship it would have been difficult. Military spec ships had three levels of encrypted security that kept them from being easily tampered with. Not that she was unable to contend with them all, but she was just as glad that she didn’t have to. The Suri Madron had originally been a terraforming barge, and the control systems and electronics were all factory-standard civilian designs. Access was technically restricted by passcode, but it took her electronic slicer less than ten seconds to figure that out. Then she was in, and ready to do mischief.

First things first: download contemporary schematics and the last few years of public orders off of the system. While that was happening, she ran an application that jiggered the security protocols of all of the exterior airlocks, which would have made boarding the ship a little m

Comments
Tuesday, 07 October 2008 15:13
Couldn't resist . . . such powerful comments . . . compelling me to write more . . .
WOONSOCKET
Tuesday, 07 October 2008 16:15
Everything's in play! Let the ride begin!
And River allied with the Monkey King offers such fascinating possibilities: chaos or fractile logic...or both...
MISAIM
Tuesday, 07 October 2008 18:13
Yes, awesome sauce!

Life is what happens when you got other things planned, and this chapter really shows that.

This entire situation looks like it's gonna be an epic mess in terms of the Browncoat's plans but awesome to read, per usual. I could reread these chapters a million times and never get bored.

More more more is what the people want!
Tuesday, 07 October 2008 19:03
I like the new pace I just hope you can keep it up. Rivers quest for the monkey king, that just can't end well. i doubt mal will like a monkey on his ship.
Tuesday, 07 October 2008 20:38
I haven't read word one of this story... but I've printed and bound your other two, including the controversial epilogue.

Just wanted to throw my gratitude on the pile; I look forward to perusing this at my leisure, once your business is finished.

Thanks!
BIGJACK
Wednesday, 08 October 2008 00:42
Dude you are so mighty!!
Keep up the excelent work we missed you badly in the long absense.

Thanks
Wednesday, 08 October 2008 00:47
Is it Christmas? What a gift! Loved your description of the deconstruction and reconstruction of River's amygdala - who better to help River than someone who rebuilt primate brains? Loved Kaylee's understanding of Mal's thought processes and what makes him happy. The technical descriptions of the gunboat targeting system was spot on. But I'm really amazed at how much unbelievable trouble you're about to release on the ship and really looking forward to where all this is going to end up. River philosophizing about the monkey king was just perfect.
SLICK
Wednesday, 08 October 2008 03:18
"Cry Havoc, and let slip the dogs of war" Though the true meaning perhaps does not apply, the emotional content does. Its great to have you back STA.

A fellow browncoat was expressing the opinion to me that there was to be no more of the verse made public. How wrong could he be when we have you and others on this site, plus The Signal, etc.

It doesn't take a movie or even tv to spark the imagination. Your stories are the Verse. Keep on flyin'!
FARAN1078
Wednesday, 08 October 2008 12:07
Oh. Holy. Hell. What a mess this is going to be. Like Jayne says; the way Mal plans things and the way they turn out ain't exactly similar. Though, truth to tell, this wasn't ALL planned by Mal.

I thought Mal's dialogue sounded a little too "gee, golly, shucks," bumpkinish and he used a few too many terms of endearment with Kaylee, but I'll have to give it a second read before I decide if it really is off a bit.

Thanks for such an unexpectedly quick gift.
Wednesday, 08 October 2008 14:05
I guess I shoulda been a little more clear on that. Yes, Mal is feeling a little over-the-top affectionate, but that's a result of a) his stunning insecurity about Zoe and b) the afterglow of his recent hot encounter with Inara. This is Mal's way of coping -- and you have to admit, Kaylee kinda brings it out in him.
SARAH0832
Wednesday, 08 October 2008 14:39
OMG! Here we go! The players are moving into position and ready to go. Thank you so much for continuing this story.
Thursday, 09 October 2008 20:47
Augh! My first comment didn't post!

Sokay, just gives me another opportunity to heap praise upon the StA!

I have to say, I STILL find your characterizations of our beloved crew so spot on, it's like I'm watching them up on the big screen again!

Keep it up!





Please!
SALAMANDERSFIRE
Monday, 24 November 2008 22:05
Just had to re-read the whole thing due to missing you starting posting again. Just as brilliant as I remembered it. Of course having read 30 odd chapters in a little under a week I really want the next bit immediately, but can only hope the delays are due to you producing things that keep the roof over your head and enable us to offer remuneration for your efforts.
Are we due something in bound print form from you soon? I did enjoy Spellmonger.

Thursday, 04 June 2009 14:49
Is anybody still out there? I'm been waiting for an update for awhile now.
SOARINGONLEAVES
Friday, 17 July 2009 01:01
Hey StA

I found out about your books a couple of weeks ago and have furiously devoured them. Any clue when you might be able to complete this? Im itching to find out how this story ends.
Wednesday, 07 October 2009 17:09
Hey Screw!

Any plans on finishing this story up? I miss your take on the 'verse -- it's the best damn Firefly-fic I've ever read.
BIGLOKI444
Sunday, 14 February 2010 21:40
OK it's time to poke STA untill he writes some more unfinished buisness.
POKE POKE POKE
FIREFLYCRACKHEAD
Tuesday, 02 March 2010 01:26
I'm re-re-re-reading Screw's stuff again after getting my girlfriend into Firefly. It kills me that this epic story may not be finished. Screw, if you're getting this, please let us know what you're working on so that we can support you. For everyone else, please support the author and purchase Spellmonger: http://www.lulu.com/content/paperback-book/spellmonger/436079

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