Unfinished Business
Chapter Twenty Nine
Rachel slunk through the dimly lit corridors of the Suri Madron like a shadow, her special stealth “ninja suit” helping her avoid detection. She didn’t really even need to bother with it – this level was restricted access, only Alliance personnel, and damn few of them around at that. In the half-hour she had been sneaking around, she had seen one bored guard and one flustered technician – and three or four monkeys.
The monkeys had observed her, no doubt catching her scent, but they didn’t seem terribly excited about her presence. She had been a bit unnerved by them, but she knew this was a lab ship. They were probably specimens or pets. Either way, since they didn’t deter her or obstruct her, she ignored them and focused on her mission. They watched her pass with casual interest and went about their own business.
After skulking around in the shadows she finally closed in on the control junction box on this level. It was unguarded, of course – who guards a non-descript access panel? -- and unlocked, so popping the cover off was child’s play. She hooked up the screen she carried and started in.
If this had been an Alliance-built ship it would have been difficult. Military spec ships had three levels of encrypted security that kept them from being easily tampered with. Not that she was unable to contend with them all, but she was just as glad that she didn’t have to. The Suri Madron had originally been a terraforming barge, and the control systems and electronics were all factory-standard civilian designs. Access was technically restricted by passcode, but it took her electronic slicer less than ten seconds to figure that out. Then she was in, and ready to do mischief.
First things first: download contemporary schematics and the last few years of public orders off of the system. While that was happening, she ran an application that jiggered the security protocols of all of the exterior airlocks, which would have made boarding the ship a little m
And River allied with the Monkey King offers such fascinating possibilities: chaos or fractile logic...or both...
Life is what happens when you got other things planned, and this chapter really shows that.
This entire situation looks like it's gonna be an epic mess in terms of the Browncoat's plans but awesome to read, per usual. I could reread these chapters a million times and never get bored.
More more more is what the people want!
Just wanted to throw my gratitude on the pile; I look forward to perusing this at my leisure, once your business is finished.
Thanks!
Keep up the excelent work we missed you badly in the long absense.
Thanks
A fellow browncoat was expressing the opinion to me that there was to be no more of the verse made public. How wrong could he be when we have you and others on this site, plus The Signal, etc.
It doesn't take a movie or even tv to spark the imagination. Your stories are the Verse. Keep on flyin'!
I thought Mal's dialogue sounded a little too "gee, golly, shucks," bumpkinish and he used a few too many terms of endearment with Kaylee, but I'll have to give it a second read before I decide if it really is off a bit.
Thanks for such an unexpectedly quick gift.
Sokay, just gives me another opportunity to heap praise upon the StA!
I have to say, I STILL find your characterizations of our beloved crew so spot on, it's like I'm watching them up on the big screen again!
Keep it up!
Please!
Are we due something in bound print form from you soon? I did enjoy Spellmonger.
I found out about your books a couple of weeks ago and have furiously devoured them. Any clue when you might be able to complete this? Im itching to find out how this story ends.
Any plans on finishing this story up? I miss your take on the 'verse -- it's the best damn Firefly-fic I've ever read.
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