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Bedlam: Part 10

Saturday, December 10, 2005

The evening after. Mal and Inara are still at it, those crazy kids. Meanwhile, our BDHs try to figure out how they were tracked. Serenity *spoilers.* Rated R-ish.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5047    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Bedlam Part 10: A Strange Bedfellows Story

By Kaynara

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It’s Joss’s verse--I just borrow it.

***

At the kitchen table, Simon sipped his tea, feeling the steaming herbal liquid slide down his throat. It did nothing to warm his chilled body. He didn’t notice River until she was right beside him, jumped when he felt her hand on his shoulder.

“You startled me.” He smiled, pulling out a chair for her to sit beside him. “You used to do that back on Osiris. As a girl, you’d pad around in bare feet, sneaking up on me like a ghost.”

River smiled knowingly.

“She remembers.”

“Of course you do. Brat.” He poked her in the ribs, making her giggle.

“It’s my job as your sister,” she said with a long-suffering sigh. “Where’s Kaylee?”

“Probably with Inara. The two of them have been whispering and giggling to each other ever since dinner.” He raised an eyebrow at River. “I don’t suppose you know what they’re talking about?”

“Girl talk.” She stretched out a long, slender arm along the table, rested her head there. “No boys allowed.”

“I’m your brother. You’re supposed to tell me things.”

River smiled slyly.

“Didn’t tell me ‘bout you and Kaylee.”

“That’s...that’s not the same thing.” Simon blushed, looked uncomfortably into his tea.

“Didn’t tell me what our father did. Caught the prodigal son in a blackout zone and cast him out of Eden. Brother and sister had to face the elements, face the wrath.”

“River--”

“You’re sad now. Thought one day we’d be allowed back. Thought he’d understand what you did, give forgiveness.” River shook her head. “Can’t ever go back to the Garden, Simon.”

Simon slid his hand through hers, lowered his head so their foreheads almost touched.

“I don’t want to go back home, mei mei. It wasn’t Paradise. It was all lies.”

“Can’t you see, Simon? We’re already home.”

***

Malcom Reynolds was not a happy ship captain. Someone had bugged his baby, planted a sneaky little tracking device that submitted signals to Ye su knows where. That someone

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 10 December 2005 20:26
*grins and chants* more More MORE!
Saturday, 10 December 2005 20:44
Kaylee to the rescue, that's great stuff! I love your idea of the beacon and Central Osiris Time, so to speak. Plot makes a fangirl happy!


There's, of course, other things I love, too. Zoe and Gideon... didn't that go down smooth. Oh, Zoe...

And then Mal and Inara. Their habit of hiding and obfuscating obviously (and deliciously!) did not go away with the addition of (hot, sweet, squee-worthy) sex.

They're both guilty of omission, big time, but for both it's still a thing of valid reasoning. It's not just "Oh my God, it's unrequited!" angst. We have a professional Companion (up until now...) and a broken man (or so he thinks) and that's problematic, no matter how wonderful things are in the bedroom. Or the hotel room. Or the cockpit. The kitchen, the bridge.

I'm very excited about this whole story. When is there to be more?? *g*
Saturday, 10 December 2005 21:01
simply lovely. No, funny and lovely and witty and tense all at the same time. Nice way of words you have.
Fave bit was the nice mechanism where Mal says crew is to meet, then you started him talking to them after using just a dividing ---. Felt like I was watching a good FF ep.

I'm going to previous part now, see if I can see Zoe and this Gideon wrapped up and thrusting.
Saturday, 10 December 2005 21:23
Wow i cant wait to find out what happens next its so good!!
Saturday, 10 December 2005 23:05
Just so loving this and especially Mal and Inara being together, that is super shiny! Loved your idea of using the time synchronisation with Osiris as the way that *wangba dan* Gideon was able to track them and pass the information on. Kaylee is just *so* good. Also loved the water pistol fight and all the dialogue for everyone made me so happy I wanted to dance. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 11 December 2005 02:11
there is just no point reading any other mal/inara fic after this great story. Love it!
Sunday, 11 December 2005 03:33
fantatabulous. love the set up...plus the taunting of jayne ;)
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 11 December 2005 05:05
Ahh I love it! I want more! You write Mal and Inara soo well!

And I loved the water fight! Thats so Kaylee!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 11 December 2005 06:27
Mal and Inara are sooo great together in your wonderful tale. I think you write all the characters extremely well. Please continue soonest!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 11 December 2005 11:44
suspended her??

thats good news!!! right? -- well for Mal and Inara anyhow
Sunday, 11 December 2005 20:09
The idea about the becon and clock synchronisation with Osiris was ingenious!

Shame about Zoe...

Love the update - would love it more if you updated it aga soon!
Monday, 12 December 2005 14:58
I can't figure out why this isn't scoring a 10. Excellent piece of work. Smart, sexy, and funny - with plot, even!

Please, please keep writing.




Monday, 12 December 2005 17:34
yay! MORE! iwant to know if Mal is alowed to be happy about this! i love the way it writin keep it up!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 13 December 2005 13:44
Fabulous story! Hope there will be more soon!!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 14 December 2005 17:44
Am sucky at leaving feedback but that was so damn good. whoa.

Am eagerly awaiting rest of story. :)
Friday, 16 December 2005 21:37
there are so many funny and sexy and genius-y bits in this its hard to believe you're not joss masquerading as a mere mortal...

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