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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Forty-Five

Thursday, December 8, 2005

Zoe makes a bridge. Jayne takes some invigorating exercise. Mal and Inara find a cozy bedroom . . .

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Forty-Five

ALPHA TEAM –59.43

“That’s a big chasm,” Zoe remarked, peering over the side. “Long way down. Y’know, I think that’s the first time I’ve ever used the word ‘chasm’ in its proper context.”

“Is that meaningful?” Master Lei inquired politely.

“Not particularly. I think the last time was an argument with my husband over reproduction. ‘Chasm’ neatly described the different opinions we held on the matter.”

“A shame,” the General sniffed. “You would produce magnificent children.”

“Yet in such professions . . . hardly the ideal place to raise a child. Their mother a soldier, their father a pilot? Both are dangerous professions. How responsible is that?” asked Master Lei. “They should wait until things settle down. Until they can find the Way of their marriage, and then children will enter into it naturally.”

“Bah!” snorted the General. “Superstitious nonsense. My wife and I waited. By the time we were ‘settled’ she had become infertile. Seize the day, Zoë!”

“Bringing a child into such a situation would be ill advised. Should they birth an orphan?”

“Life is short! There is never a good time. If you wait, you may lose the opportunity.”

“Wash isn’t ready yet!” the monk insisted.

“Zoe obviously is!” the General responded.

“Boys!” she yelled. The two men continued the argument in heavily accented Chinese dialect she had trouble following. They ignored her. They didn’t have time for this. She took a deep breath.

“Atten-SHUN!” she bellowed in her best non-com voice, in the tone that said ‘there is a superior officer observing your childish and unprofessional behavior. Get it together!’. While neither man was young, and each had been accorded respect for decades, they had both served in the military, had endured basic training. Their reflexes responded. The General actually did come to a semblance of attention. The Master straightened as well, and stared at her.

“Perhaps you forget yourself . . . corporal?” General Lei as

Comments
2X2
Friday, 09 December 2005 02:19
Hehehe... love Mal and Inara's bickering banter... sounds very true, especially when Inara's thrown for a loop when Mal asks about 'reataining' her..
Friday, 09 December 2005 03:56
Shamed to say I had a little orgasmic joy of my own, seeing Jayne in his element ;P

Things I Loved:
Jayne, Jayne & Jayne.
Kaylee tryin' to cheer Wash.
Mal & Inara's sniping.
Nyan Nyan.
Hell, I love the whole gorram thing.

Holding out for the next thrilling episode.
Friday, 09 December 2005 16:05
Don't rightly see how fighting machines wouldn't recognize a threat just because it was behind them, but it didn't make the story less enjoyable. Thanks!
Friday, 09 December 2005 16:09
As trainers, they weren't the brightest machines. Their optics did not give them 360 degree vision. They were also 100 years old. Don't worry, really smart and deadly warbots are coming next chapter!

ScrewtheAlliance
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 09 December 2005 18:23
Thank You.
Friday, 09 December 2005 22:16
Oooh! I knew it! I knew Nyan Nyan was going to be a girl. Bwa ha ha!

Man, this just gets better and better!

I can't believe you started all this with a Shorny Kaylee and now they're on a ship as large as a town over a dead planet. Amazing.
Friday, 09 December 2005 23:46
Good stuff.

"...and the ubiquitous Red Crystal..."
I'm glad you're keeping up with 'Verse impacting current events.



ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 10 December 2005 11:03
One word: Whoa.

I just went through and read 'em all up till this one, and let me tell you this is one of the best Firefly stories - well, novel really - out there. The characters are so spot on, it's creepy. As in, suspicious-thoughts-about-you-really-being-Joss-Whendon creepy. I love your Wash ^^ and there have been moments were I full-on laughed out loud; or choked trying not to.

Satiated, but eagerly awaiting more,
Winger
Sunday, 11 December 2005 02:43
Interesting. Somehow Mal keeps finding girls in boxes.
Monday, 12 December 2005 16:16
YEEHAAA!!!!! Most Shiney!! Hmmmm, Killer 'bots or 35th TAU? Rock or Hard Place? Descisions, descisions....
Monday, 12 December 2005 21:18
if i wasn't addicted before (and i was) i am well and truly hooked now...*clicks 10 rating several hundred times*

b

p.s. zoe's slipping out of her accent
Monday, 12 December 2005 21:21
"let me say that you got the nicest ass of any chief engineer I ever saw"
wash better not let zoe hear him talk like that...MORE PLEASE!!! c'mon, i said please!!!

b
Monday, 12 December 2005 21:29
Oh, all right. Since you said please . . .

And as for Zoe and her accent, consider it a reaction to being in the presence of a superior military officer. Zoe is a natural soldier, and while she is often casual with her speach on Serenity, when under the eye of the General she tries to speak more exactingly. I altered her accent to fit the situation, just as I did in KL with Book, having his accent get more casual when he was in a shuttle with Simon, drinking. Subtle things, and it doesn't always work. But that's where I was coming from.

And Zoe, I don't think, would feel threatened by Wash's comment, especially not to Kaylee. In some ways Wash and Kaylee have a similar relationship as Zoe and Mal, without all the war history. They are both responsible for Serenity, and have to work closely together. A certain amount of familiarity and sibling-esque banter is to be expected. She paid him a compliament, he was simply trying to return one. But your point is well taken.

StA

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