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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Forty-Four

Wednesday, December 7, 2005

Mal learns that old soldier don't necessarily fade away . . .

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Forty-Four

ALPHA TEAM: -68:21

Zoe nodded emphatically that she was ready, and as soon as she was certain that everyone was lying perfectly still on the deck, she laid down, her shotgun in her lap.

Motion seekers were among the nastiest of aerial mines. They had been used for hundreds of years, one of the more annoying of the long list of anti-infantry munitions. She’d first encountered them the first year of the war, when she was part of the Browncoat regiment that took Camp Bonewitz on Boros. It was only a supply depot and support base, but it was full of purplebellied Feds who were freaking out because of the revolution that was happening around them. They were scared and trigger happy, and they had whole warehouses full of munitions at their disposal.

Which is why they needed to capture the base intact. That had been her first night op, her first infiltration, and the first time she had cut a man’s throat without making a sound. It was also her first time with aerial mines.

They operated just like any other mine, laying quietly in one place and looking inconspicuous. When they were triggered by proximity, however, they didn’t just explode – any dumb mine could do that. They instead launched a tiny machine into the air that leaped up to the height of a man’s head and did any number of things. Spin wildly while releasing carbon monofilament and decapitating anything in range. Home in on the sound of your boots, or the heat of your body, fly in aggressively and explode. Sometimes the explosions were pure concussion, enough to knock you flat. Sometimes they were shrapnel, sometimes they were filament darts or napalm or acid or other, even nastier things.

This one, she felt, rather than knew, was a Motion Seeker. Move faster than an inch a second and the little metal bird that would sprout out of the door would find you and explode a shaped charge designed to crush your ribcage and liquefy your internal organs with the blast.

“Everyone ready?” she

Comments
Wednesday, 07 December 2005 08:41
not fair. now I'm hungry.
*goes off to find stew*
Wednesday, 07 December 2005 09:11
Great action sequence, StA.

“Well hello, ladies . . . !”
I think Jayne's in Merc heaven. I can just picture him trying to take more than any one man can carry.
;P
Wednesday, 07 December 2005 12:06
That Jayne's a naughty, gun-obsessed fella for sure.


There's enough afoot right now to satisfy a centipede. Well done.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 07 December 2005 13:43
Well hello ladies. . . .


Another superb installment.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 07 December 2005 19:38
Man, this is twenty pounds of good, quality writing shoved into a five pound bag. Nice addition with the stone warrior guy (Sounds like a bad football team. Heh). Wonder what's up with those woekn warriors guys? Guess we'll find out!
Thursday, 08 December 2005 00:42
"...if they’d had just a bit more of each, we would all be saying ‘ain’t’ and square-dancing right now.”

Good stuff.



Thursday, 08 December 2005 17:30
"But Mal? What business does a guy like that have with a face like his?”
i'll have you know, mr washburne, that captain malcolm reynolds is a fine figure of a man!! looks good in tight pants too...*grin*
just loved the conversation at the end, with simon babbling away about being trapped with mal, wash talking about babies and then river coming in and asking about stew...brilliant!!!

b
Sunday, 08 January 2006 15:45
Lei Chien? Is that Johnny's name? And if so, where have I heard it before? Sounds like a dog. Anywho, lovin' it as per usual. Although "bleed your lizard" made say (out loud. In the library) "Eww, MAL!" Love River's final line. And of course I couldn't adore Jayne more if there was a prize for it, so "hello, ladies!" makes me happy. *still catching up!!*
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 13 February 2006 23:39
Old evil MantiCore is still around? Nice shoutout to Dark Angel Woof! :-)

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