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Pieces: Ch 12-25.

Friday, December 2, 2005

Sometimes pieces fit, sometimes they don't and sometimes they can't be put back together. Second installment for the Joss_100, Jayne and Kaylee.

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The second installment.

Disclaimer: Not mine. Did you *see* Jayne and Kaylee nekkid scenes in any of the aired episodes?

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Quick Links:

--> The first installment, ch 1-11 can be found .

--> Prompt set 2, the whole prompt table can be found .

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Prompt #012: The Start.

Words: 458.

FOR THE ASKING.

He wondered how long it would take for her to come to him and it hurt just a little bit more when he realized that it was just what he wanted, that he'd been counting.

Nearly a whole day.

"Are you really leaving?"

The cloth in his hand felt good when he stuffed it into the duffel, a vicious thrust that meant nothing, not really.

"Looks like."

He didn't even turn to her, just kept looking at the mess of clothes on his bunk and the bag that seemed too small to hold everything when it had been more than big enough to cart his entire world onto this boat in the first place.

*~*~*

"You already met Zoe, we also got her husband, Wash, a mechanic and a companion." Mal's voice carries back to him as they walk into the ship. "Before you get any ideas, she don't service crew, so I don't want you sniffin' around after her, no matter how pretty you think she is, you hear?"

"Yeah." Jayne stops as he sees her across the cargo bay, all shine and light and already he's taken. "That her, is it?"

"What? No. That's Kaylee, our mechanic." Mal pauses and turns to look at him. "She don't do no servicin' of any kind, either, dong ma?"

"Yeah, sure, got it."

Ye soo, if that there piece of pretty is what they're keepin' around as the mechanic, he sure as hell can't wait to see the whore.

*~*~*

"I don't want you to go, Jayne." God, she knew how to twist a man's heart strings with nothin' but her voice.

"You sure

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 02 December 2005 15:49
Aww, so sweet! And very believable. Loved the confrontation with Simon! Can't wait for the next installment.

Lvs2read is too lazy to sign in. :-)

"I love my captain"
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 02 December 2005 16:03
AWWWW- very nice- looking forward to more!
Friday, 02 December 2005 16:11
Bravo. This just keeps getting better. The characterization is dead on, and I love the idea of Jayne wanting to leave home because he didn't like where his future was leading him - just like Kaylee. I can't wait to read more!
Friday, 02 December 2005 22:13
This was so very fine especially Jayne spelling it out for Simon how he had his chance with Kaylee but he threw it all away. Love how gentle and attentive he is being to her, sigh. Just like a man in love. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 02 December 2005 22:14
So, I read parts 1-11 three times while waiting for the second installment, and i was starting to get a bit impatient. But oh goodness was it worth it!
Saturday, 03 December 2005 01:55
That was perfect, just... perfect.
*sigh*
This is the kind of thing I wanted to write, but you just did it so much better.
'End, for now', huh? Does that mean we can expect more? I vote YES!
Saturday, 03 December 2005 04:56
Canton: Yeah, there's more. If you follow the link to the prompt table, you'll see there's 100 prompts to get through (hence the name 'Joss100'), and I'm only up to 25!

Thanks for reading guys!!
Saturday, 03 December 2005 12:14
I love the whole series and can't wait for the next 75! Loved the mandarin and him selling off Vera's trigger
Sunday, 04 December 2005 03:04
After I posted my comment, I re-read the intro and had a complete Homer Simpson moment - DOH! *slaps forehead* I'm so stupid, of course there's more.
This one goes up to one-hundred...

Then I did my happy dance ;P
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 04:14
Wonderful to see the caring side of Jayne come out in a way that is not overdone.

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