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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Forty-Two

Wednesday, November 30, 2005

Enter the Treasure . . .

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Forty-Two

Julian tried not to stare at the wretched creature who was sobbing inconsolably on the deck in front of him. As interrogations went, this one had been less than productive.

It was bad enough that that idiot Fox had mangled what had been a perfectly straight-forward assignment. Julian was honestly sorry the man hadn’t survived the debacle at New Lesbos, because he had wanted the pleasure of killing him himself. Ordinarily he wasn’t so bloodthirsty, but when he saw the views of what the moron had done to the little village, his blood began to boil. Not only had he tipped off the prey to their attention, thus depriving him of a decent chance of surprising the Firefly, but he had criminally involved – and killed – innocent civilians. On top of that he had hired a sorry excuse for local talent to back him, and gotten them all killed as well. The only bright spot to the whole episode was this woman.

She had been one of the “bounty hunters” (if the term was used in its absolute loosest sense) Fox hired, or at least part of the same group. She was an ugly little thing, not more than ninety pounds soaking wet, a face like a hover-wreck, and she walked with a limp. She was devastated, having lost (apparently) a husband, a son, and a lover all in one fell swoop. Only her brother-in-law survived, and he was up on capital charges.

But she had tracked the Firefly as it fled, apparently with some idea of revenge. It was hard to say, honestly, what her plan had been. But she knew that ship was involved. And she was filled with the fire of vengeance. Repeatedly she had begged Julian to do her the courtesy of destroying the ship, enslaving the crew, and let her have her sadistic way with them before he collected his bounties.

That was a little much to ask, of course, but he did pay her handsomely for the information she had. The locals were of little use – all the video captures from the fight had been mysteriously erased, and for some reason the citizens of

Comments
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 23:45
Oh wow.
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 23:50
Ooohhh! Challenges. That's very Indiana Jones... Which, you know, I can sort of see. Mal's got a kind of Indy vibe.

These last couple of chapters have been posted so promptly and have been so fantastically detailed, I'm in awe of your abundant talent.
Thursday, 01 December 2005 00:41
That's not a moon!

Them bounty hunters is smart fellers.



Thursday, 01 December 2005 15:44
Got to thinking during the last chapter. Why would river be spooked by Hecate? Every other time she's gone all crazy-like there's been real flesh-and-blood villains about. Or are you saying her imagination is even more overactive than Wash's?

This chapter - Love how you keep referencing what we know from the show while exponentially expanding the Firefly universe.
Thursday, 01 December 2005 15:48
Art:

I had River go all nutsy here because she had a similar reaction in the BDM when they got to Miranda. No living people there, either, but River's special senses apparently extend slightly beyond the realm of the living. She also had a reaction in Bushwhacked ("Ghosts . . .") that I drew upon. But good observation. This comes up again soon.

StA
Thursday, 01 December 2005 19:06
Very fine story weaving though I am holding my breath at what the good gorram may be facing them on the ship. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 02 December 2005 06:33
reading and love'n it... one thing can mal and inara dicuss this sword topic in a little bit more, depth... not like in the next chapter if you don't intend to but ..you know...soon, please?
Friday, 02 December 2005 17:05
"His Majesty, Simon Tam, King of the Whole Rutting ‘Verse.”
i'm sure jayne would be so pleased...

"Nasty li’l buggers, ice zombies"
SEE!!! told you...

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Friday, 02 December 2005 22:46
Yep, you still have my attention. ;) And being the huge Wash/Zoe shipper I am, I couldn't help smiling a sad smile at their exchange in this chapter. It speaks to the future ghost echoes, and the scene is uncomfortably on target in its irony. Another good chapter - good set up with the ghost ship as well!
Wednesday, 07 December 2005 21:36
I KNEW the treasure was going to be on a ship! Ha!

*feels smart*
Wednesday, 01 February 2006 20:34
Just have to comment on this one line...

"His Majesty, Simon Tam, King of the Whole Rutting ‘Verse.”

Genius. Absolute genius.

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