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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Forty-One

Wednesday, November 30, 2005

The Emperor speaks, Jayne keeps his eyes out for ice zombies, and Inara enjoys some good clean fun.

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Forty-One

When the exploration party returned Master Lei bid them all to assemble in the lounge to hear the Map’s pronouncement, and its direction. Though it was all business, the result of several month’s work, everyone was in a festive mood. Book put on a large pot of coffee and another of tea, and Kaylee broke out the popcorn. Even Inara came out of her shuttle for the occasion – a rare occasion this past week – leaving only River absent. She was strapped down in the infirmary under heavy sedation, so she was close at hand.

The more jovial attitude was welcome after the last few hours on Hecate. The dead world strangely beckoned. The crew could not help but to stare out of the viewports at the desolation outside. Ostensibly, they were in a busy downtown of a frontier world, a commercial and cultural center for the entire planet. Only there were no people, no movement, no sky, no wind, no rain, no noises at all. Within sight of the ship more than forty frozen corpses could be seen. The whole world was one big, dark, spooky forest, it seemed, a constant and depressing reminder of man’s mortality.

“Are we ready?” Johnny asked. “Everyone here?”

“Close enough,” agreed the General. “I think Yang is in the can. He’ll catch up. I’ll go ahead and start.” He placed the Map in the center of the round table and activated it. An air of expectation filled the room.

“Greetings, honorable descendents,” the holoimage of Emperor Lei said, bowing first toward Master Lei, then to the General and lastly to the Prince. “I trust you have succeeded with the final portion of the quest? Or do you report failure?”

“We have, Your Imperial Majesty,” agreed Master Lei, bowing in return. “We have the motto you seek.”

“What is it, then?” the hologram asked serenely.

“Res dura, et regni novitas me talia cogunt moliri, et late fines custode tuer,” Master Lei said respectfully. The hologram wavered as the Map’s computer accessed the concealed data. Then the Emperor s

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Wednesday, 30 November 2005 10:09
Magnificent Inara moment there. Glad she found some release.

Where is the treasure? Where is the treasure??
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 13:06
wow... Inara is wild... she is wild, and right at the moment sad and confused. but still young even though she acts like as if she were older. perfect, and not all in one ya know. and organized mess, so human and alive and so full of pain and flaws. she must see it she is the perfect example of what all humans are, not a buddhist statue. not always fat and lacking that something that makes us human. you write her well, better then many though i expect that she has had some bad experiances before serenity and i don't mean little bad ones but big bad ones cause no one act older then they are with out reason, no one gets wisdom with out the years or grey hair... its just some times for some folk they a year can happen in a simple second, while you almost die and you life flashes by for example. so the only thing i don't seem to be seeing in your version of inara is that she has a past that makes her who she is. i mena i se bits of her past and all but, when things happen to her in your fanfic you make her sound to shelterd. i supose that is fine and i can see it, but then i think back and she actually counciled book in an episode. yes even the naive can help a confused and sad person , but she seemed to be more grown up to me in thees matters. the only thing i saw she was acting silly in was in actual relasionships, she almost seemed to fear actual intamacy. she did not see sex as intamacy, or rather not to intamate, but she did see intamacy in being told she was loved and so she stoped the captain before he said it in the HOG. well any way i still like this bit you write of her, even if it is not exacly as i see her. I am anjoying it and all the detail,thank you. -OldSoul

P.S.: thank you for writing mal like i think he is educated at least a lil bit, though i think you paint him even more educated then i imagined (He knows Latin?!..hell i have trouble with spanish sometimes and its my second languga!)... you should have Inara catch him in the act of resiting poetry just for the hell of it!.
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 13:25
I really enjoyed Simon and Jayne scavenging together. I could hear the actor's voices speaking the dialogue in my head, and that's always a sign of great writing. Kudos, and keep going. I'm with RelFexive on this one - Where's the gorram treasure?
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 13:30
That Simon's a smart feller.

Sir John...ny? You're skirting cheap punnery. Watch your step.



Wednesday, 30 November 2005 14:31
A little author's commentary:

First, Inara: I do like to write her as if she has a past . . . without revealing her "big secret" (which I don't know, so don't ask). I do see her as sheltered from some aspects of life, way too knowlegable in others. She is functionally a priestess, and has the ability to minister from others, but that does not mean that she doesn't suffer from spiritual crises of her own from time to time -- like the first time she kills a man. The Inara arc is not done, yet, and stay tuned to see how she further develops.

Mal's Edumacation: I've always seen Mal as someone with more education than he lets on. While little is known about his origin, save he grew up fatherless on a ranch on Shadow, almost nothing is known about the exact circumstances of his youth. My interpretation is that his mother's ranch was prosperous and that Mal was brought up as a kind of yeoman frontier nobility. His social attitudes seem to reflect a more classical education, something I believe he is trying to hide in his present circumstance. I don't think he's necessarily ashamed of it, but he likes it when people underestimate him, and he has this penchant for intellectual slumming. Don't get me wrong -- he's no PHD -- but I can easily see him studying (or being forced to study) Virgil, Homer, Ssu Ma Chen, the Bible, etc.

As far as the Latin goes, it isn't that Mal knows Latin -- he knows and recognizes it from the Prince, first and foremost. It is a subtle reflection of his own internal justifications for joining the Independents, a little sub-text that works well into his "Am I a Browncoat?" arc. Perhaps it was too subtle, but I like the effect.

And yes, the damn treasure is coming. But I do so enjoy building up the suspense. Cruel of me, I know . . .
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 14:36
WOW!!!!!!!!! MAJOR LEAGUE BLOWN AWAY!!!!!!!!! StW, just when I think I got you pegged, you do something like this! You ROCK!!
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 18:04
yeah, ice zombies are nasty lil' buggers...

b
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 18:06
We all know "beamed" is the term to use for near-instantaneous matter transmission. I've also heard "mattermit". Wouldn't it be shiny if your Cortex Video - CV - became the word for video distributed via the Internet?
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 18:10
Technically, art, I can't take credit for it. KRAD used it in the Serenity novelization, but it fits. In the book it's called "CorVue", or CV. But I like your Idea.

StA
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 21:27
Very shiny. There is a kind of sad 'coming of age' for Inara in her need to go out on to the dead world and make contact, even if it is with the children of the dead. Makes me ache for her as if this brief sojourn gives her something she herself never had. Can't wait to see where you take us next, and Simon using his 'criminal mastermind' head to lead Jayne to some supershiny wealth substitute is excellent. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ZYDECODOLLY
Thursday, 01 December 2005 00:58
I am constantly amazed at your Inara. You really do her justice. This one left me in tears.
GGCRONO
Thursday, 01 December 2005 04:22
Great chapter. :)
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 01 December 2005 16:32
Your best yet. Course that's subjective and I did want to be an archeologist as a youth! Too seldom do we get treated to characters like Inara and Simon. Much too complicated and clever for consumption by the masses, or so Hollywood calculates.

I wonder though if its my vantage point of a few more years than most of your readers? With maturity comes a different perspective and a greater appreciation for ones own mortality. Thus I can empathize with Inara and understand Book's desire to leave a past life and persue the way of the 'cloth'.

ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 01 December 2005 21:21
...and now Inara knows what form complete failure of civilization can take in the `verse. Creepy as hell, but pairing Inara and this little girl will make whatever it is she's going to do eventually all the more driven. I can see the wind-up, and I'm waiting for the pitch.


P.S. I know it's in keeping with the twisted physics of the `verse, but something in me still shudders at the whole "bullets don't work in vacuum" cliche. They do, they work fine unless they're designed to tumble and don't have an atmosphere to bite into. For those who don't already know, bullets carry their own oxidizer. In fact, it's actually harder to design any kind of cased that _doesn't_ work without oxygen than one that will. Caseless rounds might be different, but I can't imagine a round of any particular velocity being able to function without it's own oxidizer mixed in with the propellant. As I said, good nod to show physics, but the show's physics make me twitchy.
Sunday, 04 December 2005 01:21
Wow. Wow! Wow!!!!

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