The Pleasuring of Kaylee, Part 2
Serenity’s handmaiden sashayed up the ladder from her cabin to the corridor outside, one hand giving the little white lights arrayed around her door a playful cat’s paw pat. She slowly walked down the hallway toward Jayne’s quarters, smiling to herself and feeling the cant and sway of her bare rump inside the coveralls draped around her hips, the light brush of the arms tied low cupping her back end.
“No panties, Kaylee”, he’d requested last night and she’d been awesome-happy to comply, leaving the underwear in her drawer for today. Goin’ commando wasn’t exactly a new thing for her anyhow, it was a pleasantly sexifyin’ way to spend an occasional day, if not done so frequently that it became a boring habit. What she liked about it was the knowin’ of a secret nobody but her had knowledge of. That, plus the knowing little smile on her face now and then throughout the day brought on by the feel of it, pleasant slide slip pull of material without the buffer of underwear.
So going without undies was nothing new to Kaylee for her own delectation, good for a little sexual tension relief. But shucking undies and walking around for the express purpose of pleasing a man, well that was of the new.
She smiled at the thought of pleasing Jayne, of the pleasuring they’d worked on each other last night. Felt a twinge of anti-expectation, wondering if it maybe the night’s pleasures was just a one-time thing. Found herself wondering if there was more, if there could be more than just that hard sweet mating, a one-time only. What if, after sleeping on it, Jayne had woke up feelin’ like he’d gotten in and that was all he really wanted?
The conditions were just right last night, maybe, an all-systems-go kinda deal, and perhaps it no more bore repeating than the likelihood of reinstallin’ that Rey coupling she’d disconnected her first day on Serenity. That coupling was the little bit of guess work mixed with instinct, the first bit of mechanic-ing she’d ever done for Mal, the
Heee! Right there, heee! That is so very Inara. I like it.
So, um, part 3 will be when? 'Cause I'm with Rinny here, they're gonna fall in luuuuuuuuuurve.
You added a great little slpash of Mal/Inara in too!.
Lovely can't wait for the next cahpter.
Your stalker who is too lazy to sign in.
sorry, couldn't resist...
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And this one does that in touching on Kaylee's apprenhension (continuing from TPOK part 1) as she talks with Inara.
>>>Could it be that Jayne came wrapped up in that kinda packaging? Big posturing bull-headed knight errant on a gorram alabaster charger?>>>
That description was not only right on, the wording was simply stuning..."bull headed knight"....I loved it!!! LOVED IT!!!! I had never thought of the Jayne Cobb character like that but when I read that, I could easily understand the meaning behind it.
>>>A real gorram wu de tyen ah night torn through with hot wet pure-d bonafide love-making. Such like as he’d read in the best spank books.>>>
"Spank books"!!! I want to be in your mind, leafing through all your stored words and phrases and steal them all for my own personal use, would that be okay? I'll treat them well....
Excellence in it's purest form here! I really dig the whole "how does he feel for me" theme going on here...
NIPNIP
"Pretty cunning, don't cha' think?"
My favorite line from one of your fics yet! Awesome. *Beams* Im not ever really sure what to say here. I guess I was taken aback by the crudeness of Jayne's section, but I guess its just Jayne in a way. It was real and even something I have to nod at being honest writing, but maybe not to my taste. It was one of those breaks Ive mentioned before. It was lusty romance, manly grime, romance. I liked it a lot though, there was a lot of good character development. Everytime I read one of these I think about how nice it would be to have a lover who thought like this, color me impressed yet again.
"More than half-way to Jayne’s quarters, Kaylee made an about face and headed toward the engine room instead."
Uh, Jayne's room and Kaylee's room are in the same corridor. Practically right across from each other. She had just finished dressing in her room, so halfway to Jayne's would be about one step (unless you intended it to be that way, but I read it differently).
"Jayne exited the bunk barely giving any care to his gunshot thigh. "
"And as he stood up straight, holding on to the wall by the bed in case of wobbling, ..."
He exits his bunk, then stand by the bed, then uses the toilet in his room? Somethin ain't right.
"Nobody expected the Spanish Inquisition."
I almost laughe out loud when I read that line. :)
On to the fic.....
Serenity’s handmaiden sashayed up the ladder from her cabin to the corridor outside, *Washie...handmaiden, how awesome a description of Serenity's crew chief..brilliant!
Heck, other than in the biblical way, she didn’t really know him at all. *yeah? biblical way, and which bible were you talkin' about?
but the girl who wore the pretty pink confection made o’ ruffles and fluff at the ball *great job at connecting this to the BDS.
Jayne woke up groaning. Frowned and scratched his scrotum idly. “Ohhhh, yeah,” *Our man, scratching his cullions, and ohhhhing at the act, man, you have so many Jayne wannabees captured in this.
both hands up on the wall over it and threw back his head ready to enjoy a long slow satisfying piss. *see comment above, babe...this was wonderful!
Which was exactly when a cataract of urine commenced spraying every which way, in all directions but down into the toilet bowl for a length of three feet all around. *see the comment to the comment above, I can so see mys...uh..Jayne doing this.
To do ~to~ her. And get done to him. *Yep, thats it, you've done it now.
Washie, While I'm off to bed at this time, I'm also CRAVING the momen when I get back to finish this series. It's spot on Washie writing and you know thats the writing I most love here.
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