Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

The Pleasuring of Kaylee

Monday, November 14, 2005

More Jaylee. Kaylee prepares to see what last night's mamboing means to her and Jayne today.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4340    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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This will read like a sequel to The Measure of a Jayne, Part 5. You can find that easily if you click on the ItsaWash profile (in light yellow just below the fic title above). Look to the right when you get to the profile.

This is my second fanfiction foray and I’m mightily in need of feedback. If you like it or you don’t I’d be grateful for a few words. Just push the button at the end of the fic and speak to me. It’s easy and you’d be amazed at how helpful it will be.

The Pleasuring of Kaylee, Part 1

The morning after.

Kaylee woke up and streeeetcheddd herself out in luxurious cat-like motions, a smile on her face and sleep dust in the corners of her eyes. She rubbed at the crusties, stretched again and felt a small sort of pleasurable twisting ache twixt her nethers.

“Jayne,” she said in a tone he would have surely loved to hear. ‘Probably will, too’, she thought as the smile grew bigger and her lashes lowered. He’d measured up to her fantasies right fine last night, and, if their love play and coy talk before, during and after was any indicator, he’d hear a dang sight more than his name purring from her throat when he finally gained full healing and recovered strength to do the ridin’ ‘stead of bein’ the rid-ee.

Anybody looking in on Kaylee’s open honest face during these thoughts would see a secret look of recently pleasured woman, a hint of embarrassment mixed with joy, dimple deepening along with the rosy flush at her cheekbones.

After running a friendly hand down to stroke the curls at her thighs’ juncture, she checked her chron and realized it was time to rise, gauging that her internal alarm clock had left her time for a shower before breakfast.

The lithesome woman whipped back the sheet, only covering she ever needed during sleep, and stepped naked from the bed, feeling the pull and tug of muscles she wasn’t all that used to employing that nevertheless had gotten a pretty good workout last night.

As she strode toward the shower, she used her left foot a

Comments
Monday, 14 November 2005 12:26
Great to see what happened after the night before. Keep writing I am really enjoying your stuff
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 14 November 2005 13:47
Yeah, but... but... Jayne didn't get close to actually *pleasuring* Kaylee here, now did he?

*pout*

You tease. (in a good way, of course).
Monday, 14 November 2005 13:48
Ack, Anon is me above (stoopid logout).
Monday, 14 November 2005 14:41
Anon or not, you are always and anon a sure bet for fun feedback, Jacqui. Thank you for it.

Anybody who loves Jaylee better go see Jacqui's squee-worthy music vid on the subject: Link (a smaller file, should be easier to download): http://s26.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2BF0MXE716JYT21TAD3BWN73ZZ
Monday, 14 November 2005 14:42
Shoot! Maybe that didn't work out right. Jacqui, please give them the correct link here in feedback, will ya?
Monday, 14 November 2005 14:57
::jaws music:: Your stalker is back!

Yay! More jaylee fic from ItsAWash!

Yeash, that shower tease was enjoyable. I can't wait to see what happens when Jayne finds Kaylee with no panties.

You did a good job with the "morning after jtters" thoughts. Kaylee was obvioualy glowing, but not quite sure of where she stands too.

Can't wait for more!
Monday, 14 November 2005 14:59
obvioualy=obviously

::eye roll::
Monday, 14 November 2005 16:56
ok me again, told you I was a stalker.

I just read this again because it makes me so happy and can't believe I missed this the first time

"she had questions to ask his body such that last night hadn’t even begun to answer sufficient-like."

That's a GREAT line!
Monday, 14 November 2005 16:59
*does dance of joy* yay!!! don't usually get to see the morning after...but we did an' it was goooooooood...

b
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 14 November 2005 18:07
whoa..i still havent and willnever read this but the title..WHOA.

(it's piff)
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 14 November 2005 23:50
More! I loved the Measure of a Jayne, and this was a great follow up. Now we need to hear Jayne's thoughts, and of course, more Jaylee time---plenty of naughty, too, please.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 00:46
yay! Happy!Kaylee. Would love to hear Jayne's POV. Love yer story!!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 04:30
Oh, but you people SURE DO make things shinier all the time for me!

I'm glad you're liking Kaylee's morning after and I hope I do right by you when she gets back to Jayne. Reading what you think helps more than you know, dear readers. :0) More's coming.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 18:30
hooray for more jaylee smut!! - can't wait for the next bit
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 21:18
Want more!
Now!
errr... I mean, very lovely! Tastily done. And ya, I can understand Kaylee's wee bit of confusion. Is Jayne her man? He don't seem the type to say so outright.
You gotta get him healed up right quick so we can ask! :D
Tuesday, 29 November 2005 05:30
>>>A new day. A new woman with new feelings, unsure of which area of the ship she ought to get to first: her Man's cabin or her Engines.>>>

>>>Was Jayne her man? This was the second time she’d thought of him so.>>>

I think those above questions were the defintite underlying theme in this installment and you really brought it on home, Wash, as always.

I think from after the last series you did, this is the right transition for the storyline to go, a little softer, a little more reflective, just like real life when we go, "Holy sh*t!!! What did I just do???"


>>>she had questions to ask his body such that last night hadn’t even begun to answer sufficient-like.>>>

>>>lightly probe the folds and furrows echoing the feelings brought by the man who’d been there, had eased himself inside her there, from her body's portal to womb’s own, so well, so good. Oh so good. Wuo de ma, good didn’t even begin to touch it.>>>

Your word choice never fails to amaze! You have a tendency to take everyday situations and just spin an out of this world decription on them! Wow!!

Awesome Wash, just totally awesome!

NIPNIP
"Pretty cunning, don't cha' think?"
Tuesday, 29 November 2005 05:40
oh, the whole, "no wearing any panties" bit did a number on me...

*NipNip fans self with the nearest book, trying not to kick them nasty thoughts going through her mind*
Thursday, 08 December 2005 08:12
great work Wash a great begining to an awsome looking story looking forward to reading the rest

Ducky
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 10 December 2005 01:54
I really liked this one. It was short and sweet. More of a prolouge than anything. I liked the pattern of thought it felt real, there was conflict and imbeded emotion there. I feel like I need a shower now too.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 31 December 2005 06:25
Hey! I do that foot-thing too, all the time.

Oh, and very sexy.
Thursday, 27 April 2006 15:52
Good again with the writing, especially the descriptive bits. Kaylee really gets me going, even if she is with Jayne in your stories.
Tuesday, 22 August 2006 03:37
The awesome thing about having been turned on to you at the late date I was, is that I've got lots of Washie library to read, hence the late, late date of me reading this. So glad I was, and did. Cause I gots lots more of you to read, and will do so, pipe in mouth, warm smoke encircling the scene, and wonderful, marvelous words to sink in.

the fic......

Strong leg bent at the knee next, toes surrendering to her hand each item of clothing one at a time so she could drop them in a wicker hamper for later laundering. *As you usually do washie, you put the reader IN the room with our girl, guy, or whoever, and make it work, I can see this, kaylee would have strong abilities with all of her extremities and this captures it, awesome scene.

Not at the price of it and the price they’d all pay if they ever ran out. *few had dabbled in the fact that the crew of Serenity was always eeking out their existance and you did it marvelous here.

A new day. A new woman with new feelings, unsure of which area of the ship she ought to get to first: her Man's cabin or her Engines. *yep, that'd be it, but I think our mechanic, would probably fall to the engines, although, she'd be thinkin' of Jayne's "measure" all the time.

remembering Jayne’s “Don’t wear no panties when you come see me tomorrow.” *totally our man, way with words to a woman.....NOT, but...shall I say.."Point of fact" maybe?

Relighting pipe...on to part 2.

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