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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Thirty-Two

Saturday, November 5, 2005

Our Heroes escape -- but not without recourse to rumination.

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Thirty-Two

Serenity banked gracefully around a majestic snowcapped triple-peak, and slid to a hover over a glass-like, pristine, and terribly, terribly cold mountain lake. With a whine the ventral hatch swung open. Jayne stared down into the crystal clear lake and back up at his blindfolded prisoner.

“Ai ya! That’s a long gorram way down!” he grinned, failing to mention the lake only twenty feet below. “You musta really pissed off the Cap’n!”

“Is he always this harsh?” the man asked loudly, with a note of resignation.

“Nah. He’s gotten loads better since the day he nearly blew me out an airlock. ‘Course, I was misbehavin’ a mite,” the mercenary admitted.

“Randy – can I call you Randy?” Mal asked pleasantly as he approached. “Randy, I’ve just radioed your boss, told him I wouldn’t lay down arms, told him I was tossin’ you out if he didn’t back off.”

“He didn’t back off, did he?”

“Not so much.”

“You’re going to push me out of here, aren’t you?”

“That is, indeed, the plan,” agreed Mal. “Doc, do it.”

Rolling his eyes – clearly unhappy about doing this – he stepped forward, rolled up Randy’s sleeve, and jabbed a needle into the man’s upper arm. Only Jayne’s firm grip kept him from jumping and breaking the needle.

“Ow! Hey, what the hell was that?”

“Wouldn’t you just love to know,” Simon said, in a low voice. “Let’s play, ‘what’s Simon got in the syringe?’ shall we?” He pulled the needle out and swabbed the area with antiseptic. “A harmless vitamin shot? Or a deadly virus that will kill everyone you’re exposed to? Maybe it’s for air sickness. Or perhaps it was ten cc’s of lysergic acid diethylamide, in which case your next few hours will be a hellish nightmare of hallucinations and your brain will never work right again. The Captain tells me you think I’m an evil genius. You tell me.”

“I thought you were just gonna kill me!” Randy said, panic in his voice.

“Oh, where is the fun in that?” Simon said sarcastically. “You know, I tire of be

Comments
CUB
Saturday, 05 November 2005 04:04
You know, so often in the big, epic stories, it's the little things that stand out. For me, it's your Mal. You definitely have the best Mal around, from what I've read. That's a good thing.

Also, I just cannot get over how quickly and regularly you churn out top-notch material. We're talking thousands of words at a blistering rate, and it's not like you're shoveling chum - this is some great stuff that's been well-thought out and well-edited. If I did nothing but write full-time, I don't think I could match your pace.
Saturday, 05 November 2005 04:37
Oh yeah. That's the stuff. I doubted a bit on your charqacterization of Inara, and here you go, restoring my faith. That last little exchange of Mal, Zoe and Book's- spot on. In every case. Absolutely. but especially Mal. *runs away to carefully draft her 2-page, handwritten letter to joss, Universal, Keith DeCandido and anyone else who will listen to get you writing Firefly tie-ins*

In the meantime keep 'em coming!
Saturday, 05 November 2005 10:30
I always like the depth you bring to the characters, I surely do.
Saturday, 05 November 2005 13:08
Rockin' character development. Shiny! I meant shiny.

易弯曲
Saturday, 05 November 2005 17:34
Loved this chapter and having someone to take on the playground bully so Serenity could fly free was just the icing on the gorram cake. Especially loved your take on Mal, all the voices ringing so true. Very shiny, *xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 05 November 2005 20:05
“I got me my own piece o’ Hell right here. Ain’t a hope of a better. It’s all I got, but it’s mine, an’ you can’t take that away from me without endin’ me first. That’s a fact.”

DAMN STRAIGHT!!!

b
Tuesday, 08 November 2005 02:50
Enjoyed this a lot. Especially Simon playing along with the psychological torture. While he might not succumb to the darkness that envelops Mal at time, he can still indulge it a bit. Which I think is good for him.

Can't wait to hear back from ya.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 14:50
Ballad, you want to talk to Keith Decandido directly, just mosey on to http://www.exisle.net. He hangs there.

Screw, I gotta say that I am deeply loving your fic. It gives me some real honest to goodness firefly sounding tales and you manage to work in so many little moments that really make it feel like a living, breathing universe.

Definitely top of the list in my book.

Godeskian
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 14:50
Ballad, you want to talk to Keith Decandido directly, just mosey on to http://www.exisle.net. He hangs there.

Screw, I gotta say that I am deeply loving your fic. It gives me some real honest to goodness firefly sounding tales and you manage to work in so many little moments that really make it feel like a living, breathing universe.

Definitely top of the list in my book.

Godeskian

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