Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

The Measure of a Jayne, Part 3

Tuesday, November 1, 2005

NC17-ish, in which Kaylee helps Jayne on the road to recovery with a sponge bath while he's in his bunk. I hope to get them both on board that little space real soon.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3908    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Haven't spent a lot ot time prettying this part up so if you find fractures that need splinting, please let me know and I'll fix them. Hope it mostly follows okay. For those of you who asked for Jayne to hurry up and rise again, trust me a little longer. Delayed satisfaction makes the reaping more pleasurable, dontcha think? :0)

The Measure of a Jayne, Part 3

Simon finished recording his latest findings which, when compared with the past days’ figures charted on a graph indicated almost miraculous progress. He checked once again to be sure, and dared himself to hope that his latest doctor/patient ordeal might actually be nearing an end.

The signs led toward it being a good end indeed, better than he’d have dared hope when he first laid eyes on Jayne bled nearly dry into the desert dust, life slowly leaking from two grievous wounds, either of which could have been fatal. The copious but nearly sterile dust that caked him from head to toe was an aid in stanching the blood flow. It was likely part of what kept the burly merc's soul and body intact until Simon's superior services brought him back from near-dead status.

Yes, the results were all there on paper logged in Simon's precise and flowing script. Some combination of the excellent education his noble parents had provided and the grueling hours of emergency surgery he had successfully wrought during his spotless internship had brought him to this place and this patient.

Jayne reaped the benefit of Simon’s learning and experience. Hell, they all did on this boat. Not exactly the clientele he had envisioned when he was a star medical student and intern. In no way could the smooth promising path of his former life have prepared him for its current and frequent twist of healing gun shot/knife lacerated/poisoned/tortured/fractured thieves aboard a smuggling ship.

Would that eons younger and far happier Simon Tam striding along toward a secure future have believed it if told about the fodder that would provide him with his bread

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 01 November 2005 21:21
I have been waiting for Part 3--wow goooood, please keep typing, more please! Shiny tension!
Tuesday, 01 November 2005 21:30
""Only the god of fornicatin’ monkeys could know.""

Made me laugh out loud right there! I think the sexual tension is getting to me though!
Jayne's gonna do something about this soon, ain't he?
Tuesday, 01 November 2005 23:01
SameErtia and Anon: with reviews like these (and a 9 rating!!!) I can't help but keep typing this one toward a fit conclusion. Yeah, the sexual tension's wearing me out too, so don't worry. I'll put 'em out of OUR misery in Part 4. :0)
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 01 November 2005 23:46
I have a real problem with the rating system. The story's not NC-17 yet.

I demand that this be corrected.
Tuesday, 01 November 2005 23:54
Anonymous, Dude. That's why I labeled this part NC17-ish. Emphasis on "ish."

Take a lesson from Jayne in extremis, babe and cool your jets. Mama's working on the big horizontal mambo scene soon.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 01:49
"Mama's working on the big horizontal mambo scene soon."

Promise?

Will there be any solo Jayne scenes? Cuase you know. . .yum.

Great job, looking foward to the rest!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 01:49
Cuase=Cause

Stupid dyslexia ::rolls eyes::
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 01:54
LOL. Yeah, I promise horizontal mambo is in the near future.

Dunno about Jayne and solo strokage. See, not having the equipment myself, don't know if I can pay adequate homage. But maybe...

Stand by.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 02:47
Okay on future tension release- but keep the same pace you have been- and ooh baby!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 06:22
LOVE IT... KEEP GOING!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 11:59
What a tease!! Love it, but p'raps the mambo can be drawn out into two chapter's worth of fun.. Like any excellent Jaylee fiction- I don't want it to end!
Great,
Rubymoss
X
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 12:31
Don't want to see the head spin but please type quickly for the next part.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 15:30
"See, not having the equipment myself, don't know if I can pay adequate homage. But maybe..."


Yes but, provided you find the right study buddy, doing the nessessary research could be so much fun.

I'm not pushing you. I'm loving what you're doing. You've just set my dirty mind all atwitter.

Well tht and the thought of "research" is so much fun.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 17:18
Okay-where's Part 4? You're killing me here.....and I like the drawn-out two chapter idea above-although I don't know if I can take it...
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 18:31
I love your Jaylee stuff,
This is great.. I'm just impatient.
are you done yet?

Thursday, 03 November 2005 20:35
i'm happy just s'long as you keep doin' what you're doin'...now hurry up and let jayne get his dancin' shoes on!

b
Saturday, 05 November 2005 04:12
Sexual tension probably has to be the most diving thing in story...present it the right way and you've got people who are hungry to see what happens w/your characters, present it perfectly and you've got a great Big Damn Story! The whole spongebath thing was great...the whole "hovering" thing we talked about??? and that's what they do here, they're close, so very, very, close but not entirely, just enough to tease...I kept scrolling down further and further with that anxiousness, waiting , and hoping for something....and I think we all know what that something is...
the desciption is a lot here (sorry baby girl, had to throw someting like that in here! you know me!)but then again, when you have a scene w/no dialogue, you have to rely on your visual senses to carry everything.
It just gets better and better...fly Wash, fly...
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 11:13
Ok, finished with part 3. I have to admit that it took me a while to get through this once since I had constant interuptions. I still liked this one, though I cant say as muc as the previous two. Its hard to put my finger on it exactly without going back through but there was something about a third of the way through this entry that seemed to break stride. Again, dont get me wrong, its very hot, and very well written. I will give it more thought when I have a chance and tell you if I figure it out. Other than that I liked it. I in particular liked coy manner of it all.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 09 December 2005 04:15
Fantastic descriptions, the long Kaylee-point-of-view discription of Jayne's body and face is one of the hottest things I have ever read. EVER. And that is to say alot as I am a fan of stories like these ;)...the sexual tension was thicker than ...ee...something really thick (read into this as you like).

I can't say "keep on going!" as you've already finished this...but I can encourage you to go pro if you haven't already! You have such an eye for detail and a way with words. A really rare gift!
Friday, 09 December 2005 08:15
Oh my! Who was that masked Anonymous man/woman? You..honor me greatly.

Thank you to all you lovely and swai readers out there. You make me want to write and write and cry in gratitude while I'm writing!
Wednesday, 26 April 2006 02:19
Shiny :)

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