Didn't solicit a beta this time, but thanks again to my three original Senseis and princessnipnip for confidence-giving.
The Measure of a Jayne, Part 2
Kaylee fumbled her cabin door open, flew into sanctuary, stripped her outer clothes off and dove into bed, flushed face down. No use. No hope for it. She tried to tell herself that nothing happened. Nothing. She’d held his hand till he fell asleep and that was all she’d held. Absolutely.
But the charged up clockspring tightness below her navel said she’d better quit lying. Although Kaylee wasn’t beyond obfuscating to others when telling the truth would only hurt ‘em terrible bad, she always spoke truth to herself, even if she was the only one she was talking to.
So Jayne’s nurse rolled over onto her back and let her train of thought steam on through, engine fully stoked from the way he’d looked, innocent strong big fully equipped blameless male parts laid out, then levitatin’ in her hand’s grasp.
That same hand that’d so recently held his cock now streaked down inside her plain white panties, touching what her nethers already told her brain was furious moisture. Getting wet and wetter just from recollecting Jayne’s own.
Might could have saved herself this particular horizontal exercise, mighta done without the need to stroke and fondle her body toward completion using this mind-fecking Jayne imagery, if not for the fact that she’d involved two senses in her explorin’ when just one woulda likely done. A quick visual and then a quicker exit mighta left no brain-scarring at all.
Nope, she couldn’t have left it to one sense. Weren’t enough for her to look, she’d gorram-well had to touch, had to take exactin’ engineerin’ measurements as if to sculpt him from memory outta cold engine grease later on.
Two senses were all she’d used for explorin’ Jayne’s terrain? Was a sheep-humpin’ wonder she hadn’t tilted her damn head down a few inches more, far enough to inhale his smell and further still to have a taste.
That woulda
You do know, right? 'Cause I do want more. You can't just leave it there.
A 9 for the lack of predictable Slot A and Tab B tension.
Lovely,
RubyMoss
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I'm loving this and waiting not so patiently for more. :)
I mean... yes, please, I'd like a bit more of this tasty, naughty, oh-so-sweaty-sweet fic. :)
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This was a well paced, well written and enjoyable read! It made me smile more than once.
The character voices are spot on. I love the way that it's written - as though the reader is inside the character's head. (The way that you described Kaylee's state of mind is really good –especially the feelings and doubts that would arise after that kind of situation. I love the way that she tried to convince herself otherwise. It was really Kaylee-esque! )
Also, I love the he-knows-that-she knows now. :) The playful nature of the situation makes it a joy to read. Looking forward to seeing where this is heading!
I've never really considered Kaylee and Jayne having feelings for each other, although, I'm getting really comfortable with the notion. (And that’s just after reading parts one and two.) It comes across in a natural way. Looking forward to seeing how this works out.
Great work ItsaWash! I want to read more! *Rushes off to read the next part.*
9/10!
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