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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu -- Chapter Twenty-Two

Tuesday, October 18, 2005

Career counseling, homecoming, and trouble on the horizon.

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The Treasure of Lei Fong Wu

Chapter Twenty-Two

“How long has she been out there?” Simon asked, his breath fogging up the viewport.

“Almost six hours. Suit’s rated for ten.”

“Six . . . hours,” Simon said, amazed. “I woke up and she was gone. I thought she was just wandering the ship again.”

“Tinker noticed her suit was gone a couple of hours ago. I thought she was just trying it out again,” Althea said. Her voice carried in a tone that was more concerned than worried – a mother’s tone, he realized with a start. Not a tone he could ever recall his own mother using.

“Is she all right?” he asked, returning his attention to the viewport.

“She’s alive. She’s conscious. She’s alert. But there ain’t no way that girl’s even a noddin’ acquaintance to all right.”

Simon could see River’s suit outside of the lock, floating about a hundred feet away from the ship. To his relief, she had strung a lifeline to a support. Even though her new suit had built-in maneuvering jets that could, theoretically, bring her back to the lock, he didn’t trust them. Or her ability to use them properly. River was a genius, but some things you only learned from experience.

She was at the very end of her tether, and twisting slowly in one direction – then a moment later he saw the spray of jets, and then she rotated in the other direction.

“So . . . what’s she doing?”

Althea looked at him, as if he was blind. “She’s . . . she’s dancing.”

“Dancing?”

“It’s odd, I’ll be the first to admit. But that’s what she told Tinker when he asked.”

Simon turned and rested his back on the bulkhead. He closed his eyes and sighed in frsutration.

“She’s . . . she’s insane!” he finally got out. “I spend every credit I’ve ever earned, and all of my inheritance, to break her out. I get us hidden on the most disreputable, trashy freighter I can find. I come to blows over whether or not we both live or die. I shield her from every negative influence, try to keep her safe. And she goes dancing – in a space suit – d

Comments
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 15:54
I'm starting to realize that this one might be a bit longer than "Kaylee's Lament" -- any objections?

Lovin' the comments!

StA
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 16:38
Nope, make it as long as you gorram want - we will lap it up! This is so good and thoroughly enjoying how it is building up. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 17:52
It can be as long as you like if it's all as good as it's been so far!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 18:13
Well I mean all it means is putting ok book 3 for awhile. But thats ok as long as we have good stories to read.
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 18:27
make it as long as...as...as a really long thing for all i care, s'long as there's more of this:

"Honestly, I don’t care if you want to wear a frilly pink apron to dinner and have us all call you ‘Aunt Suzy’"

b
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 18:45
Make it as long as you like, I'm loving the ride.
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 19:52
no objections here either, JUST KEEP THEM COMMING! your writing is GREAT! It is one of the few things I enjoy about surfing the Web.
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 19:57
Longer. Longer is better.

易弯曲
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 20:02
That's what my wife keeps saying . . .

StA
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 20:21
Sorry to hear that. Didn't you know - "It's not the length of the wand but the magic within it." I get that all the time. Oh... Never mind.

Anyway, loved today's chapter, especially how information and logic and intuition can lead our bounty hunters so far astray. Can't wait to see their wake-up call.
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 20:42
That didn't take...long.

易弯曲
Thursday, 29 June 2006 03:45
Just one criticism... Why is the moon four times the size of the planet?

Loving the story as always!

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