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Slinky

Tuesday, October 18, 2005

Short, inhumanly so. Jayne helps Zoe out. 'Cause he's so nice. Post "Serenity".

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Disclaimer: Of course they're not mine. I just play with the pretty toys, then put them back before anyone sees.

Comments: This scene just came into my head. Don't ask me why. It's very short. I had to get it out of my brain before I could function, so there it is.

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Zoe sits at the table, just staring at her hands, not really thinking anything. There's nothing much to think, really. She'd thought she was over the hardest of it, after two months she'd been praying she was over the hardest of it, but today was like a slap in the face.

Their anniversary.

Something slides across the table. A bundle of paper and cloth that settles itself just out of her reach. Zoe stretches out her hand, but stops before she actually touches it.

"Here," His voice breaks into her quiet. "I was thinkin' ya might want something like that today."

She sighs.

"What is it, Jayne?"

It's red, whatever it is.

"A slinky dress, you remember?"

Her fingers curl into a tight fist, away from it, and she presses her nails into the pads of her palm, so hard it she fan feel the spears of it all up her forearm. Her eyes narrow.

"Get away from me. Now. And take your dress with you."

"What?" He sounds all confused and then breathes in. "You think it's from me? Hell no, Zoe. It's from Wash."

Her eyes close as he sits down.

"See, he asked me to keep it for ya. Was gonna surprise you with it one day. He said you'd be sniffin' around Kaylee and Mal and everyone else on board. I was the only one ya wouldn't go lookin' to for it. Guess he was right."

"Why now, Jayne?"

She hears him swallow and takes a small amount of pleasure in his awkwardness.

"It were too soon, way I saw it, you wouldn't have wanted it. But you might now."

He was right. Her fingers open and she lets them rest in the softness of it. Slinky. Wash had always gone to great trouble to surprise her with things, which was a monumental task on a sm

Comments
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 14:21
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

*Snuggles Jayne*

Oh, he IS a good man! He is! And yay for Kaylee for noticing.
SKYE2477
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 15:00
love it, in a sad kinda way... everybody's hurting after "Serenity"...
gotta love Jayne though!!!
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 16:24
I really loved this though it was hard to see Jayne actually parting with his coin to buy the dress for Zoe. I could totally believe him selling his weights though after the death of Book. Very nicely done, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 16:54
Thank you. I don't think anyone is happy about losing Wash but these little tidbits, glimpses into life afterwards are making it a bit easier to cope. And I always knew that Jayne had a soft spot. Patti
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 17:05
*sniffle* this makes it just that little bit better *bawls eyes out on jayne's shoulder*

b
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 21:53
i oughta be reading catch-22, but no. instead i have been staring at the computer screen trying to think of what to comment for the past i don't know. my answer


*speechless*
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 18 October 2005 21:59
Jacqui, you've done it again. Fab stuff. Now how 'bout some more? :)
Wednesday, 19 October 2005 00:35
"'cause he's so nice"
Ha, good times!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 19 October 2005 05:16
Loved it, read it twice. We all needed a good post-Serenity paean to Wash and it's grateful I am that it gnawed its way out of your cranial vault and into the light.
Wednesday, 19 October 2005 13:10
Awwww bless his cotton socks!! *sniffs*
Wednesday, 19 October 2005 20:26
Very sweet. :)
I do love our Jayne.
CUB
Friday, 21 October 2005 03:18
The characters come across as very real. Tangible emotion delivered in a effective, subtle way. I normally prefer past tense, but I'm not complaining too loudly here. Good job, especially with the characterizations.
Sunday, 26 March 2006 18:35
ahh, jayne, such a big dumb idiot when it comes to mal an' the doc, but when it comes to his kaylee and zoe, he really does have a heart of gold

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