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Kaylee's Lament -- Part Fourteen

Monday, August 15, 2005

Serenity meets up with the Sky Hawk. A shindig ensues. River takes a boy on a walk out the airlock.

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Kaylee’s Lament

Chapter Fourteen

When a man can’t stand being under the thumb of an oppressive regime, can’t take the sting of the economic lash that binds him to the land, when that man is pressed as far as he can be pressed and does not break, it is no surprise that such a man can discover a way to escape the course Fate or God or Dharma has in mind for him and chart his own course away from any man who would pretend to be his master. Such a man was Angus McKlintock.

Angus was born a bondsman on Altera, a miserable little moon at what was, then, the edge of the Rim. When he was 16, he stowed away in a tramp freighter. Discovered by the captain, he was spared spacing (the common punishment for stowaways) and pressed into service – the captain was short two hands, due to an untimely brawl that involved local authorities the night before the ship lifted. Rather than face a long trip with a short roster, he put Angus to work.

Ten years later, Angus had learned everything there was to know about the small-time interstellar freight business, and purchased his first small transport. Ten years after that he traded up, purchasing a hauling scow, a long-distance barge sold off for scrap by a terraforming company. He called her the Sky Hawk, refitted her to spaceworthiness, and began plying routes between the Rim-worlds, taking bulk jobs that the larger companies were unwilling or unable to. He didn’t get rich, but he kept flying. Found a wife, and had five blissful years until she died in childbirth. He kept flying. Raised two boys to manhood on the rough-and-tumble frontier before a malfunctioning space suit send his body into the Black and his soul to the Beyond.

His boys, Devon and Duncan, inherited the Sky Hawk and the business, and they kept flying. They also started to do much better than their father ever did. Devon, the elder, was an excellent pilot, but was not the businessman that his father intended him to be. Duncan, on the other hand, had a natural ability to talk a virgin out

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ANONYMOUS
Monday, 15 August 2005 18:39
ah! at least you update like clock work. great story!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 15 August 2005 21:30
ROTFLMAO!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 15 August 2005 22:17
i am running out of camp theatrical things to say, so i will have to reuse some. you've done it again darling, simply too too.
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 02:59
beautiful as always, KEEP"EM COMMING!
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 03:52
it is sooo exciting to return from a trip to have three new tales waiting for me!
dialouge has been exeptionally great! i was going to comment on the forte thing (as a student of latin and french i couldn't pass up the opportunity to pass the annoying teachings embedded in my brain) but someone else did. i love that jayne was right about the whole thing!
sometimes i think you should settle with a cup of tea and write us fans here a script for the next movie. such incredible talent!
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 04:03
Reallykaylee:

Thank you, and thank you all for your high praise. A lot of the things said here have been very intriguing, and y'all's comments are the reason I get the next chapter done so quickly. After the final chapter, I'll reveal some items of interest to you all, including my future plans. Right now, I'm just having funwriting a story.

BTW, I know I screwed up the "forte" thing -- but it's been 15 years since I took fencing. I'll go back and fix it Real Soon Now.

Anyone see where this is going? Anyone? Anyone?

ScrewtheAlliance
Tuesday, 16 August 2005 22:15
Nope...not seeing where this is going at all and glad of it! I hate knowing how things are gonna end, or what the next Big Bad Thing to happen to the crew might be.

I am only prayin' that you don't have the McKlintocks turn 'em in...
Wednesday, 17 August 2005 10:58
I love the McKlintocks and was powerful jealous of their mighty fine meal, but that last part with River banging on the observation window and sticking her tongue out at just the right moment to ruin Simon's own intimate moment with Kaylee was priceless! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 24 October 2005 14:17
hehe, good use of the John Wayne reference.

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