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Abyss

Friday, April 22, 2005

Standalone one shot, pre-unification story revolving around what happened on Shadow and deals with reavers. Rated R

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3054    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Abyss

By Cassandra E

Rating: R for strong violence language, and very disturbing images.

Disclaimer: Firefly is not mine, property of Fox, 20th Century, and Joss Whedon etc.

The story is mine, though. So there.

Summary:

‘It was her land and no gorram purplebelly was taking it from her.’

A/Notes: I’m not quite sure where this story/vignette originated. But I found myself thinking about Mal’s mother and what kind of person she was. And then this theory on how Mal knows about Reavers and what they can do. And how supposedly the Reavers came aboard the ship in Bushwhacked, yet there was no sign of a struggle. Makes a person ponder. I don’t remember from which culture/country that burned/raze the land, (I think it was Russia in WWII) so the enemy couldn’t reap from it. And going by the timeline to get an ‘idea’ http://www.mts.net/~arphaxad/firefly dot html, I’m setting U-day around late May.

To Jebbypal: You rock. Like pop rocks and hot tamales! :: grin::

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And you shall hear of wars and rumors of wars: see that you are not troubled:

For all these things must come to pass, but the end is not yet.

For a nation shall rise against nation, and the kingdom against kingdom: and there shall be famines, and pestilences, and earthquakes…all in diverse places. But they shall endure unto the end shall be saved. --Matthew, 24:6—13

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Early May 2511, Shadow

The figure surveyed the landing Alliance scum from a distance. Like a hive of hornets whose nest had been disturbed, they littered the sky and the land. A small battalion sent to calm the unruly masses on Shadow that had been covertly sending supplies to Independents. On the last shipment, they'd been raided and tagged by the Alliance, probably informed on by some gorram tattling purplebelly

Comments
Friday, 22 April 2005 17:16
Wow! Powerful and superbly written. I loved this even when I was crying inside and the advent of Reavers on Shadow was a shock too. I cheered when Zoe disobeyed Mal, not letting anything part her from his side when he was walking into danger. That's what I call friendship. Gorrammit, good myth! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 02 May 2005 17:19
Some pieces defy description and praise, this is one of them. I lack the language to properly convey how brillantly concieved, written, and executed this pieces is. I acutally cried during portions (not bad considering I'm a law teacher and gave up my soul a long time ago). In short, you ROCK, thank you.

Phaedra
Tuesday, 03 May 2005 08:28
Aww, shucks Phaedra, Ali D, thank you so much. I was nervous since it was such a dark story, and I didn't think it was well recieved due to lack of feedback.

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