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Eye of the Beholder:Chapters 6-8

Thursday, May 20, 2004

What if Inara never became a Companion? M&Ipairing
Chapter Six: Den of Thieves
Chapter Seven: Recruitment and the Marrying Man
Chapter Eight: Womanly Wiles

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Chapter Six: Den of Thieves

By Cassandra E

A/Notes: Hmm…the never ending chapter. That’s all I am saying. Feedback most welcome, good or bad.

Enjoy!

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All three individuals were frozen still and silent for what seemed like an eternity. Kaylee looked on with puzzled eyes at Mal’s shocked expression, which was slowly turning into a full blown scowl of epic proportions. Meanwhile, the woman that Mal had called Inara strangely enough resembled the woman who Mal had danced with. Her skin had gone ghostly pale, but her composure reminded calm and efficient as she held her head high with aloofness. Kaylee give a quick glimpse out the door, making sure no had come by. She closed it, locking it at the same time. Her curious eyes glanced back to the scene before her.

Mal clenched his teeth in an effort to control his temper. He had been taken for a fool and that was something he didn’t take lightly. Taken in by a pair of doe eyes and a pretty face, ruttin’ hell, he should have known better. Women were always trouble, no matter how harmless they seemed. “Zhe shi shenmo lan dongxi?”

Inara shrugged delicately. “I think it’s rather obvious.”

Mal laughed in disbelief, closing in on their distance, Kaylee following him. “You’re a gorram thief.” He paused. “And I defended your honor. That’s all sorts of wrong.”

Inara smirked. “I didn’t ask you too. Rather pointless. But thank you for that sad attempt. So if I am a thief, what does it makes you? Let me guess, you got lost on the way to the restroom?”

“Well, maybe I did.” Mal lied.

Inara rolled her eyes. “Doubtful. Is this conversation over? I do believe you have an early appointment with Mr. Wing tomorrow. ”

Mal crossed his arms, a sardonic glint in his eyes. “You ain’t leavin’ here with what’s mine.”

“Really?” Inara stepped backwards until she was in reaching distance of the glittering rock. The moon shone through the viewing windows, illuminating the ornate stand which held it. She pressed a device that was stu

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 20 May 2004 21:17
Personally, I'd rather see smaller chunks more often, that way I get my fix. Can't wait for the next piece.
Sam
Friday, 21 May 2004 12:45
Errggg, I thought this was a new chapter but i realize i already read it. :(:(:(:(:( Oh well, you know I still think it's great. Although I wonder why no one ever tells me to post in smaller chunks [chuckle]. Post however long you want, just keep 'em coming Brat Goddess
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 21 May 2004 14:20
I loved this version although I have read chapters before. Don`t care in what format as long as you give us MORE :) Just loved it.
Malinara
Thursday, 01 July 2004 17:39
Finally getting around to getting caught up on this story!!! Ahh I love this, you worked the Saffron bit in marvelously, it was seamless (so don't worry about it). Personally I'd prefer it in single chapters, just cos I get lost in these big ass entries.
You write a wonderful River, although she could be a tad bit more cryptic (I like my River talking in veiled metaphor and having random congnitive moments, but that's be personally, I stills ee her as a more modern Drusilla, without the evil). And your Mal and Inara are spot-on!! I just love your Mal, captain tightpants he is!

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