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Eye of the Beholder: Chapters 2-5

Friday, April 9, 2004

What if Inara never became a Companion? Inara centric, Mal/Inara pairing. Chapters two through five.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3378    RATING: 10.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Chapter Two: A Way of Dying

By Cassandra E

Warning: Rating R- Rape/violence in first scene.

A/Notes: I tried to find a way around the warning above, but the story writes itself. So please forgive if I offend anyone. Colin Foster and Ian Black are new characters, so they belong to me. So does Annie James. Thank you to all who reviewed so far, I must be doing something right. To Visionary, I cracked up at your comment-*depressing plot wise* I must say you are right; it was done on purpose so far. You’ll see my point for it as the story progresses. Although, I must say this is the last chapter that Inara will truly suffer in. I hate doing this to her. Ch. 3 on up…a little happier. And many thanks to Neroli; I am so glad you’re my beta!

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The Next Day

It was late into the evening, all the hired servants had left; the slaves were all in their sleeping quarters. Lord and Lady Harrow, along with Jeremiah, had left for a ball given at the Lord Asano’s Estate. Inara had stayed with Annie in kitchen, helping her clean up the day’s work. The cook had entertained Inara with tales of her youth, along with memories of her husband, Henry. Inara enjoyed the way Annie had drawn her in, her mind captivated with the stories. When Annie had tried to pry a little on Inara’s past she had said very little, changing the topic. The old woman, wise in her years, understood Inara’s reluctance. Trust wasn’t an easy thing to come by, especially these days, where the Alliance government could buy anyone’s word at a price. Afterwards Annie had snuck some more food to Inara, a fare of toast and purloined ham.

“I am turnin’ in now. You best git on. I’ll be gettin’ ya things ready for tomorrow.” Annie said. Both women had kept silent on escape, not wanting to tempt fate or luck.

Inara smiled at her friend. “I will. I just need to turn down the light in the parlor room.”

“Best be careful now.”

“Yes, Annie.”

Inara watched her friend depart as she stood up from the wooden stool. She turned

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 09 April 2004 21:34
You know, I was reluctant to read this story, but I'm glad I did. Five chapters in one sitting... doesn't get any better than that. Your gorramm near perfect characterization of Inara and the rest of the crew ASTOUNDS me. Excellent work! I'm looking forward to more.

Nadia
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 11 April 2004 23:07
I should log in to review, but I'm lazy. I'm loving this story, it's a great take on an Alternate univere, plus I don't think there are near to enough Mal & Inara stories (workin' on one myself), so please keep this up, I am excited for more!!
Keep flyin'
Adrianna (Blackeyedgurl)
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 19 April 2004 20:10
nothing too fancy from me, but WOW. so looking forward to the next chapters. thank you for continuing to share your gift of writing with us.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 18 May 2004 01:59
Can't wait for the next section of this one. WRITE FASTER

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