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Heartbroken - Part 2

Monday, September 29, 2003

So the Zirondelle sent a distress call and Serenity answered it...now what?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4570    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Picking right up where Part 1 left off.

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Chinese Glossary:

Shulian - skillful

wangu - stubborn

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Heartbroken - Part 2

Mal reacted instinctively. As the blade came from his right, he grabbed the arm by the wrist, twisted and swung his body completely underneath it, then plowed his attacker headfirst directly into the bulkhead.

Jian groaned in pain and Mal tightened his grip. "Well now. Fine development this is."

Having his face mashed into the bulkhead made it difficult for Jian to speak. "Lemme go," he managed to mumble.

Mal smiled, feeling more than a little smug. "I figured there was something amiss with you. Didn't figure it was a murderous inclination."

"I said, let me go." Jian struggled, but to no avail. "I wasn't going to hurt you."

"No?" Mal bent down to pick up a small knife and admired the dual-sided inlay design on the hilt of the four-inch safety blade; polished wood on one side, and some kind of black and green stone mosaic on the other. "Well, alright. I would have to say this here sure ain't no respectable assassin's weapon. More like costume jewelry. Downright embarassing to my mind--hey now!" When Jian tried to struggle, Mal shoved him into the bulkhead again. "No squirmin'."

Jian had managed to squirm himself into position to send a steely glare over his shoulder. "Look, I think you and I both know wh

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 29 September 2003 21:33
Excellent! Love how the revelations keeping seeping through, woven into a darn good story. Can't wait for the next part, this is pretty wanmei. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 01 October 2003 17:31
I really enjoyed this, good characters, good blast from the past for Mal. Can't wait to see how Inara likes it having to fight for his attention for once :)
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 04 October 2003 04:38
Keep going, I'm really enjoying this story.
Saturday, 06 December 2003 05:13
This story is wonderful. On to part three.

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