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Past, Present, & Future: Part 7

Wednesday, March 9, 2005

This is the action packed chapter.

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Past, Present, & Future

By KaySky

Part Seven

He didn’t see it coming. The music was blaring, he was singing to the song in between bites of doughnut, and he didn’t have a care in the world. That was his first mistake.

“Hey!” He screamed as Jayne pulled him out of the hover car.

“Hey yourself.” Jayne grunted. “Got anymore of them doughnuts?”

“Take him upstairs with the other two.” Mal ordered Jayne. “When you get back you can have a doughnut.”

“Those are mine!” The man yelled.

“You’ve got several guns pointed at you and all your worried about are your doughnuts?” Zoe could hardly believer her ears. Surely Niska had to have more competent men working for him than this.

“I’ve been flying around for months. First time I’ve gotten to have anything other than protein.”

“Well then,” Mal began to speak, “Guess it’s a mighty fine thing then that your last meal turned out to be something you enjoyed.”

“Last meal?” His voice was panic-stricken.

“If you don’t cooperate it will be.”

“And how would you like me to cooperate?”

“How many men are with Niska?”

“Niska always has men around, maybe thirty or so.” His eyes starred at the ground when he spoke. A clear sign he was lying.

“So he’s got thirty men and yet he sends two of the stupidest I ever met to capture Kaylee?” Mal laughed for a second, but then an angered look appeared on his face. “Maybe you don’t know what cooperation means.”

“It means ya don’t lie.” Jayne provided.

“My mercenary’s right.” Mal took a step closer to the man. “You got a name?”

“They call me Bread.”

Not one person could withstand from laughing.

“Any particular reason why?” Mal said as he managed to control his laughter.

“I go after the money—the bread.”

“Oh well now it makes perfect sense. Jayne, why don’t you escort Mr. Bread to his friends?”

* * * *

“That was…”

“Incredible.” Kaylee was glowing. Simon didn’t let a little thing like restrict

Comments
Thursday, 10 March 2005 00:21
Drop Dead Shiny!! I like the ending of Niska like the space vermin he is.. [*gunshot*....chuckle....snort guffaw.. *gunshot*-kick to the ribs...splat] and close that chapter of unplesantness.

Can't wait to peruse the next chapter.. Mayhap you can set up a fine palaver to plan the future o' the crew!

Keep flyin',

K
Thursday, 10 March 2005 01:48
I really loved it that Zoe got to finish off that *tamade hundan* Niska. That'll teach him to torture her men! And Kaylee and Simon being caught nekkid in the cupboard was wonderful, really made me laugh. Very shiny chapter, can't wait for more! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 10 March 2005 09:32
Great job! I absolutely love the Simon/Kaylee interaction. I can't wait to see what you have in store for our poor wounded heroes.
Mai
Friday, 11 March 2005 04:18
awesome, good to see niska's dead. he is dead right. i mean you can never tell. for all i know it could have been niska's clone or something.it is the future. anyway, i'll stop babbling now. good chapter.

no power in the verse
xoxox-fredikayllow-xoxox
KAYLEE19
Saturday, 12 March 2005 00:21
Another great chapter. I love the way that you right Simon and Kaylee. Great job.
Thursday, 17 March 2005 15:36
Ding dong, Niska's dead....

What do you mean, you want me to stop singing?

Oh, well. Great chapter! I love the whole Simon/Kaylee in the closet thing. Great work, and I can't wait to read more!!

- Soul
Saturday, 17 September 2005 17:12
Soul, the Feds weren't gonna come, but you just HAD to sing! *sighs and shakes head*

can you just imagine simon and keylee's kids?!? they'd be SO sweet!!! they'd be like super-geniuses who could fix both people AND engines!!! and they would NEVER stop smiling!!! 'course they'd all have strawberry addictions and be hopeless at talking to the opposite sex...but still, daddy simon!

b
Thursday, 20 October 2011 20:12
I loved the S/K!!! And ZoeXD totally killing Niska deader 'en dead!

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