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The Trunk - Ch. 5

Saturday, February 12, 2005

The crew finishes the job and Simon gets a gift.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2887    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Firefly left me at the altar. Just couldn't make a commitment. So needless to say we have nothing to do with one another.

The Trunk

By KaySky

Chapter Five

“Holden, Harrison, Harvey, Hunter! ” Danielle squealed. “I’ve missed you!” She hopped off the mule and went running into the arms of the four boys.

“So they ain’t here to steal the trunk?” Mal’s head hurt.

“No, these are my cousins.” She smiled at Mal, reassuring him things were still going according to plan. “Boys, I’d like you to meet Captain Reynolds.”

Introductions were made and the Blake boy’s escorted the crew into their home. It was a mad house. People were running all about trying to get all the last minute things together before the wedding.

* * * *

Holden Blake was sitting in his office smoking a cigar when Mal entered.

“It’s here safe and sound, unopened.” Mal said.

“I spoke to Dani. She told me what you did to get it here that way. I can’t say many of men would have done so.” He put out his cigar and opened up the bottom right drawer to his desk. He pulled out a sack and set it on the table. “There’s extra, for your troubles.”

“Mr. Blake, throwing in extra is mighty nice…”

“Son, it meant a lot to me. Our business is finished now.” He tossed the sack into Mal’s hands. “Care to stay for a wedding?”

“That’s a mighty fine offer, but my crew and I best get going.”

“Well before you go I’d like to speak with the medic who worked on my Dani.”

“Something wrong?”

“I’d like to thank him for what he did.”

* * * *

“You wanted to see me, sir?” Simon stepped into Holden's office. It smelled of money and cigar smoke.

“It’s Simon, right?” He smiled. “Sit down.” He pulled out a small black box from his top right desk drawer. “Dani told me you saved her life. I wanted to thank you.” He placed the box on the desktop in front of Simon.

“Thank you Mr. Blake, but there is no need. It’s what I do.”

“Well Dani is a special girl. She’s not like you and I. If something were t

Comments
Saturday, 12 February 2005 11:36
This was a good story though I wish the ending was longer. Would have loved to have seen Simon propose to Kaylee, a shiny wedding on Serenity with Shepherd Book officiating etc. Oh, oodles of things, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 12 February 2005 16:59
What do you mean you have one FINAL series?
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 12 February 2005 17:09
Yeah it was late when I posted this last night...I meant to say I have one final story in the Right and Wrong series. I'm sure after I finish it I will come up with a brand new series. It least I hope so... *knocks on her head*...yep I think there's still some ideas floating around in there somewhere. =o)

Thanks for reading! ~Kel
Saturday, 12 February 2005 17:10
That's weird...it posted that comment as anonymous. Well, I am logged in. So the above comment is from me, the author, KaySky.
Sunday, 13 February 2005 17:56
I'm with Ali, the ending is just too short. Chapter 6 with a proposal, a refusal, and Zoe and Wash renewing their vows? Chapter 7 with an engagement, and a lead-in to "Right and Wrong?" Then, oh I don't know, chapter 8...well, I think you get my drift.
Monday, 14 February 2005 17:16
This was good! I guess now Simon has to get the cahones to actually propose to Kaylee!

And did anyone else notice the "mind reading" reference about Dani at the end?

KaySky, yet another wonderful tale. I look forward to more from you!

- Soul
Monday, 14 February 2005 17:24
Yea!! Someone noticed the mind reading reference. I was begining to wonder if anyone had picked up on it! Thanks for easin' my mind SoulOfSerenity!
Tuesday, 15 February 2005 08:50
oh i am just too damn slow.
i didn't pick up on the mind reading thing and it took me ages to figure out what was in the box. just one of those days i guess.
wow, he's gonna propose!! can't wait. hope it's great. what am i saying- i know it's gonna be great. you are a fantastic author!!!!
as for ideas- wish i had some, coz then i'd be using them for my fanfic. but i'm sure you'll come up with something great.

no power in the verse
xoxox-fredikayllow-xoxox
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 05 May 2005 03:02
Blake... These are decendants of Anita Blake?
Saturday, 17 September 2005 16:07
I KNEW IT!!! i knew simon was gonna propose!! i was sittin' here, grippin' the edge of my seat, murmurin' "take it, take it"...while the men in white coats edged a little closer

b

p.s. i had to read the private thoughts bit twice before i got what it meant. dani the reader...nice touch!
Friday, 25 August 2006 14:13
A good ending to this story, I liked it, and I can't wait to get to the next series, as well as the one-shots and the Valentine's Day series.

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