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Right and Wrong (Part 4)

Monday, January 24, 2005

The crew shares their thoughts of Anya's story.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3224    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: I am in no way connected to Firefly. Wish I was, but unfortunately I'm not that lucky.

Authors Notes: This is a short chapter containing the crews reactions to Anya's story. The big action packed scenes begin in Part 5. Hope you enjoy!

Right and Wrong

By KaySky

Part Four

“Raped?” Kaylee could barely say the word, “That guy raped you?” Simon pulled Kaylee against his chest, comforting her.

“Yeah…” Just like Kaylee does when she is nervous, scared or lying, she bit her bottom lip. “It wasn’t a big deal…a few bruises and cuts here and there. What happened next…” She struggled trying to get words to come out. “What happened next is why I am on the run.”

“What did happen next?” Zoe had no compassion for Anya. Something about her just wasn’t right…she didn’t trust her.

“After I shot him…Vincent walked in. I thought… Well, it doesn’t matter what my thoughts were. Vincent was angry, so angry. He wasn’t angry at the bastard for rapping me, but angry at me for killing his client. He said I would pay for this. When word got around that his buyer was dead, he was going to use me to pay off the debt.”

“Use you?” Tears were streaming down Kaylee’s face. Her heart was breaking at the thought of Anya having to go through something so tragic only to have her husband turn on her.

“The client’s associates would be highly upset by the events. Therefore, he was going to sell me to make up for it.”

“He wouldn’t a sold you, he loved you…”

“Lies, all lies.” Her voice was cold. “The men came for me…two of them. Vincent was there to. The things they said they would use me for…” The pillow she had been clutching ever so tightly was soaked with tears. “I couldn’t let it happen. So, I took care of it.”

“Took care of it?” Mal didn’t know what to think. On one hand she was Kaylee’s friend, but on the other hand, something didn’t feel right about her story. The tears, the facial expressions…they all seemed a bit overplayed.

“Dead…all dead. I killed them…at the time I didn’t know who tho

Comments
Monday, 24 January 2005 23:40
I am loving this story but the part at the end with Kaylee turning on Simon just doesn't feel right. I can't see her doing that at all. Sticking up for Anya? Yes. Then turning on Simon? No, never. The rest though is brilliant and I loved it that Jayne had the same doubts as Mal and Zoe. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 25 January 2005 02:00
I kind of rushed this chapter. There was more I wanted to include in Mal and Zoe's conversation along with the interation between Simon and Kaylee. But I got carried away with everything in the upcoming chapters, therefore this one wasn't quite as good as the first two. However, hopefully in the upcoming chapters you will find a reason why Kaylee might put Anya first over Simon. It will be sort of a flasback thing.

I appreciate all the feedback. It really helps me focus my later chapters. =o)
Tuesday, 25 January 2005 16:02
Good chapter. I like how Jayne's matched those of Mal and Zoe. I would have thought that there would be a bigger reaction to Niska's involvment, but maybe that's just me. Compelling story, though. More!

- Soul
Saturday, 17 September 2005 14:47
SIMON!!!! *slaps simon on forehead* IDIOT!!!
Thursday, 24 August 2006 14:34
“A fellow named Niska.”
~Excellent, we can never have too much of him.

She had selfish reasons for asking River to stop. She didn’t want to think about her rambles. She didn’t want to believe anything might be or might not be true about them. She just wanted them to stop.
~That's pretty bitchy on Inara's part.

Simon can be such a boob, but I don't think he was wrong in mentioning his suspicions, just in how he responded to her question.

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