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Right and Wrong (Part 3)

Monday, January 24, 2005

Anya comes aboard Serenity and the crew gains insight to why she had to leave Calentuk.

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Right and Wrong

Part Three

Shortly after Serenity docked, the crew set out to find Anya. Inara and Simon both wanted to come and stand by Kaylee’s side. However, Mal didn’t think having more people come than necessary was a good idea. There was no talking Simon out of coming. He was too concerned about Kaylee. Inara decided to stay on Serenity with Book and Wash who agreed to look after River.

After asking a few locals for directions, the crew found their way to the place called, “Annabellas”.

Kaylee took a deep breath and walked inside. Simon was right behind her and Mal behind him. It was sometime around noon and the bar was jam-packed with the lunch mob. Kaylee searched the crowd looking for Anya.

Jayne and Zoe made their way inside. Jayne grabbed the closet empty table and yelled for service. “What does a man gotta do to get some service ‘round here?”

“Jayne, do you think you can control your ape like behavior for Kaylee’s sake?” Simon knew he could be overly proper at times, but he thought there was no excuse for how overly improper Jayne could be.

“Meimei, do you see your friend?” Mal kept one hand on his gun…he had no idea what to expect…and placed the other on Kaylee’s shoulder.

“I don’t…” Before she finished her sentence, she saw the girl behind the bar. “It’s Anya.” The crew didn’t know who Kaylee was pointing at, but once she ran to the bar and plopped down in a stool, they figured the bartender must be her.

“Anya…” Kaylee sounded excitedly terrified. She was ecstatic to see an old friend, yet at the same time petrified of the trouble her friend gotten herself into.

“Kaylee?” Anya sounded shocked. “Is it really you?” A single tear fell down her cheek.

“Course it’s me, Anya.” Kaylee placed her hand on top of Anyas’ who was busy wiping down the bar top. “What’s goin’ on?”

Anya was relieved Kaylee was able to come for her. She hoped she would come… prayed that she would come, but some part of her never expected she would. She couldn’t imagine any captain ch

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 24 January 2005 11:45
You're a tweaked one, you are. Stopping the chapter right before she's going to tell what the guay is happening... I have to go with Zoe here: this Anya girl is trouble.

Very well written, though I'm surprised Simon still didn't say anything stupid. Hope you'll post the next chapter soon.

petit_rhino
Monday, 24 January 2005 12:38
I'm not sure I trust the tale Anya is spinning even if it is her version of the truth. I'm with Zoe and Kaylee is too tenderhearted to suspect her friend could be using her. Hope all our Big Damn Heroes stay real sharp. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 24 January 2005 16:50
Hmm...nice ending there. You left me definitley wanting more. I kinda agree with Ali. I think there's more to the story than whatever Anya tells the crew... More!

- Soul
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 25 January 2005 06:32
Great story. Like you, I am love just about anything Simon/Kaylee. This piece has just the right mix of romance and mystery.

Mai.
Saturday, 17 September 2005 14:43
GAH!!! there are now cookie crumbs all over my screen...oatmeal and raisin to be precise

v. good! wonder what's gonna happen next?

b
Thursday, 24 August 2006 14:26
Inara decided to stay on Serenity with Book and Wash who agreed to look after River.
~An interesting group to 'look after' River.

She looked innocent enough…but so did Saffron at first.
~BWAHAHAHA !

Though I am reading this more'n a year and a half after you wrote it, and I can just move on to the next chapter, I still think that was a good cliffhanger to leave the story on.

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