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Right And Wrong (Part 2)

Sunday, January 23, 2005

Mal informs the crew of his plans to help Kaylee's friend.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3237    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Right and Wrong

By KaySky

Part Two

All of the crew settled around the kitchen table for the meeting.

“As you might have already figured out, we have changed our course.” Dark circles lay underneath Mal’s eyes. He was too worried about Kaylee last night to get any sleep. “We should be arriving at Calentuck tomorrow morning.”

“Calentuck?” Inara repeated. “Why are we headed there?”

“Lil’ Kaylee has a friend that could use are help.”

Everyone turned their attention to Kaylee. She, too, had dark circles under her eyes. Hers were also red and puffy. It was obvious she had been crying all night.

“Three Musketeers are one Musketeer short.” River started rocking back and forth in her chair. “Soon there will be the Sole Musketeer.”

Simon went to comfort River. He had given up trying to figure out most of her ramblings. Sometimes they were clear as day, but times like now, he was lost.

Kaylee’s eyes filled with more tears. “That’s…that’s…” Her motions resembled much of Rivers’. She started rocking back and forth; tear after tear was streaming down her cheeks.

Mal and Inara tried comforting Kaylee. “Meimei,” Inara said softly, “its okay.” She brushed Kaylee’s hair out of her face. A few wet strands remained stuck to her checks. Inara was scared for her.

“No!” Kaylee screamed as she jumped out of her chair. “That’s what they called us! River is talking about us!” Mal grabbed her in his arms and pressed her hard against his chest. He was trying to calm her…trying to keep her safe.

“The Sole Musketeer…loses a friend and someone who was more.” Tears rolled down River’s cheeks. “More than just a friend…”

“Okay, Kaylee, honey, who is your friend?” Wash had gotten use to River’s spells, but seeing Kaylee go through one was unbearable.

“Her name is Krestanya Arabella Aarons. That’s what her letter said anyways.” Kaylee took comfort in Mal’s arms and managed to somewhat calm her nerve

Comments
Sunday, 23 January 2005 20:51
I cannot believe I've beaten AliD to the punch of being first to comment on fanfic! >tosses confetti, blows whistle<

Nice buildup, and the Mal/Zoe conversation os just great. Simon's bumbling is well-handled, too. Kudos all around!
Sunday, 23 January 2005 23:29
Very good story, unfolding nicely though it felt odd Zoe not wanting the Captain to go to the aid of Kaylee's friend. After all, they could always make sure Kaylee stayed on Serenity with the Shepherd while she, Jayne and Mal went down to the planet to see what was going on. Well oldfan45 you have me in stitches, here - have some more gorram confetti! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 24 January 2005 03:10
i really really like it.
of course, i like any stories with kaylee in them but i think this is really great. it's very intriguing, really making you wonder whatshe did worng and what's going to happen.
can't wait for the next installment.

no power in the verse
xoxoxfredikayllowxoxox
Monday, 24 January 2005 11:24
Great story!

I loved the conversation between Simon and Kaylee.

River's comments were well handled and creepy too! What is going on?! :)

Keep up the shiny work! Looking forward to part three!

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"I only fell is all."
Monday, 24 January 2005 16:32
Ooh, I like where this is heading. Good foreshadowing on River's part. I'd love to know exactly what her cryptic comment meant... More!

- Soul
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 February 2005 19:21
I thought it was the most best story in the wrold. it has alot of soul to the story. it couldn't have been better. I can't belive it was that good. it was beeter it was wonderful.it was so wonderful. matter of fact words can't describe it.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 February 2005 19:23
it was the best in the wrold





love
mary
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 February 2005 19:24
it was so good it was the best . it is so good that
Saturday, 17 September 2005 14:35
this is gettin' interestin'...but it's takin' awhile don't ya think? oh, shut up bell *slaps self on forehead*

b
Thursday, 24 August 2006 14:05
As much as she always got on Charlie’s case for drinking so early in the day, she was starting to think it might not be such a bad idea after all.
~Nothing wrong with a morning drink (or ten)

I think I would be skeptical like Zoe is, given the situation.

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