The array lit up like Christmas when Captain Reynolds got the ignition sequence right, then immediately stuttered off. He tried all the toggles again, insulting the zá zhǒng wáng bā dàn machine, the factory line that birthed it, the wǎng fù xián zhū shǒu of a father donated the seed, to no effect.
" Chù -sheng !" he ground out, slapping his palm into the control panel, then sagged against it. He couldn't hear her anymore. Radio cut out, or more like she'd switched off just to spite him. No more goddamn banter, not even some flippancy about his performance with the shuttle. Just... " Tā māde ," he cursed, pushing down the part of him certain that she was dead long enough to think.
The shuttle had not just suddenly developed a will of its own refusing to start up. Another landlock maybe, courtesy of Inara's good friend, and not the official kind that came flashing over the Cortex trumpets and claxons blaring. Something transmitting from this estate they could shut down. Kaylee would have a work-around, have to wait for them to get back before they could take off anyhow, which meant he was going on foot. Couldn't fly out to her, he sure as hell could bring her back.
She'd be expecting the shuttle so he'd find her either on the roof or out on the terrace. Satisfied with his plan, he shrugged on his trustworthy coat - risk though it was, no way he was going without it - then checked his side-arm, shoved it back into his holster, and dusted out.
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Zoë crouched down, deep brown eyes scanning the landscape and not for the flowers, just a routine habit to occupy her time while her thoughts wandered. The ever-alert tension, always ready for action, was something that was part of her, an undercurrent running beneath her conscious thoughts that she couldn't ever turn off.
There was some armed security about twenty yards down the garden pathway, shifting and jangling gear giving away a telling lack
The whole thing was beautifully done. I love your Inara and your Zoe. Zoe was particularly poignant here. And it's so sad these bad guys never catch on that they're in the Whedonverse and how unhealthy it is to underestimate the "girl."
I look forward to more!
Good work!
"You can't take the sky from me!"
GR! How's it feel to be back on the ol' fff.net?
Zoe is struggling, but she keeps it together. At the same time, she's starting to make choices about what direction she wants her life to go in, which should transition to Zoe at the end of the comic Float Out.
I really liked your last action scene. and the re-appearance of River (been wondering where she got to). Loved Inara as the action hero in the prior scene. I am worried about what's happening with Mal, since he set out on foot. He is sure to run into trouble, I'm thinking.
Very excited to see GillianRose back here. GillianRose, does this mean you might be posting more wonderful fics for us? (ebfiddler asks hopefully)
Bytemite, that GR archive story crawl sounds like good fun. Can I come along too? :-)
Yes, join me! I've already commented on one of her stories.
BPZ
I have works in progress, but they've been stalled for a long time. Not sure why...
But I'm loving Eidolon and happy to hear there will be more soon :)
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