Ripples. They were solid as an illusion. Steps across the water that left no trace at the source, and wore down mountains over time. She could no longer touch the surge, the storm she'd called down that swept them to safety, but she'd seen all the possibilities, and she could still catch glimpses as they flowed by. They wondered why she was less clear the more they needed her. By whose measure of clarity? None of them could see as far as she could, even in the turbulence, and in the calmer moments she was satisfied by the present.
That was not to say she wasn't paying attention, even while the play of light under the surface distracted her. They moved in a circle, ankle deep amid the lotus flowers and fragile blossoms scattered around them - teachers and novices, friends and colleagues, carrying bowls of incense with them as they held out sprigs of mint and lilies crossed overhead. The air hummed with music, poetry from a high court about the seasons as an allegory about the rite of passage.
A young man and several companies of forgetful marines who had disappeared for three months under different names traveled home. Nothing to cover up. Investigation into the program revealed the technology was still unreliable, and without the three Academy students to serve as a focus, the project was quietly dismantled and shelved. Rumours lingered about a priority target and an unprecedented display of psychic ability. The fugitive had again eluded capture.
Interest in several associates - whereabouts unknown, two possibly dead according to a video feed - participated in a major theft and security leak related to Paxilon Hydrochlorate and antidote supplies. They shouldn't have been able to break into the compound. A confirmed rogue agent of parliament had been involved in the event, but had not granted the parliamentary override that had given them access.
There were whispers among the assembly about an assassination and an inherited title, about an unknown history and other secrets. The knight
I've still got plenty of story ideas, but it'll take a while to unwind and get a head start, so probably be a few months before you see anything new from me. Until then, I'll see you all around, commenting myself, and I always love talking Firefly.
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Biggrstaffbunch with Poetry in Motion: http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16970
Also Intopaper and Fitting: http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=10918
There's a lot of other fanfic authors too with stories I love but those are the ones I spun-off ideas from.
Plus Peptuck's Forward story decided to have a psychic mind control plot line right around the time I did at chapter 10, though I also had that whole thing about the cortex on the side.
Looking forward to more from you, thanks for this one and I'm ecstatic you let Inara live!
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Congratulations on completing your epic fic! I'm flattered to receive mention in your acknowledgements. Great job, so many beautiful scenes in this story, and fittingly, your epilogue leaves us with some of your trademark beautiful images to contemplate -- the green of renewal and a new spring most especially.
Also, thanks for mentioning (and linking to) the fanfic writers and stories that influenced you in writing this -- an excellent reading recommendation list.
Take a bow, Bytemite. Job well done. :-)
Please write us some more, before too long. One-shots and shorts if you don't feel up for another epic.
You all deserve a medal for listening to me, frankly. "Oh, I'm so worried about this one section, please read it and tell me what's lame!" And various other flurries of neurotic panic.
So yeah, totally in acknowledgements. :)
I have ideas, just getting settled in and lifting my head up for a while. No worries, there should be pictures and stories that will be posted.
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