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Eidolon (Chapter 40)

Saturday, February 16, 2013

Clouds were blossoming in the distance, promising rain for the city later. The crew of Serenity and the badlands around Eavesdown Docks to the south would probably see only a harsh windstorm. Two different worlds, she mused, caught between them. (Deliverance)

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The waves were a moving mosaic, an impressionistic mirror for the city of Demeter against a green hillside. She flew the shuttle in low over the bay, circling around for a landing. The thrusters whipped up a fine spray around the platform as she touched down, like a fan of droplets from a swan alighting on a lake. For a moment she could imagine she was on just another engagement among the commercial towers of the city financial and administrative district at the base of the foothills.

Inara glimpsed her reflection in the viewscreen over the controls. She contemplated Mal's parting gift resting next to the almost-hidden star burst scar over her heart, then the empty shuttle behind her. Hard to believe only a month ago she was recovering from a bullet wound, preparing to leave. Time to be on her way again.

She tucked the chain down her white dress and pulled the blue chiffon of her stole closer around her shoulders, then slid the airlock aside, gazing out over the harbor and breathing the unprocessed air. Clouds were blossoming in the distance, promising rain for the city later. The crew of Serenity and the badlands around Eavesdown Docks to the south would probably see only a harsh windstorm. Two different worlds , she mused, caught between them.

A light voice broke through her reverie. "Inara? Are you all right?"

She pushed aside her wistful thoughts for the sake of her guild sisters. "Sheydra," she smiled. Her friend returned the gesture and helped her down from the shuttle.

"You didn't answer my question," she admonished. The priestess of the abandoned Burnet training house was blonde, beautiful, gentle, and refined, showing off her excellent taste in an aquamarine dress. Her wisdom to matched her years and she was keenly observant. When Inara had worked with her as a teacher, Sheydra teased her mercilessly about the spirit of adventure and pirate lovers. "Do you miss him yet?"

Oh no, she was blushing already . This didn'

Comments
Saturday, 16 February 2013 17:30
Mal and Inara back together, could this be for good? Somehow I don't see that rat Atherton Wing staying out of their lives but it doesn't hurt to hope he catches something painful and terminal right quick. AliD :-)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
BYTEMITE
Saturday, 16 February 2013 17:40
This is the last chapter before a probably short epilogue where I'll deal with the Operative as well as this ceremony and more Mal Inara.

I had all these pretty ideas about this ceremony that didn't make it into this chapter because all the exposition made it explode. This is the longest Eidolon chapter yet.

Atherton Wing is kinda busy drinking himself into irrelevance, but bringing him up here is important because it's one of the many factors that helps Inara make her decision. Ties into Mal's concerns from last chapter - Inara is starting to realize that there are risks on the ship, but whenever she goes to see clients or leaves the ship she could be captured herself or used as bait. Neither choice is safe, but one choice is clearly better.
Monday, 18 February 2013 00:58
Liked Inara's explanation of Atherton, always appreciate Sheydra teasing Inara over Mal. Mal would swim if he needed to get to Inara, and leave Serenity to Zoe to accompany Inara if she'd have him. I get the sense they are both willing to give up what they both thought they couldn't live without to be together in this chapter. If this was your goal, you met it.

One question: how does the Head Mistress know Mal's father?
BYTEMITE
Monday, 18 February 2013 03:06
Things are definitely changing between them.

She doesn't really, since they've never met. But she knows OF him, and said something rather significant that Mal misunderstood. I've been dropping hints about what I think Mal's backstory is, anyone got any ideas? :)

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