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Eidolon (Chapter 38)

Monday, December 3, 2012

The girl processed that response. "He brought the medicine? He saved us?" Inara nodded, considering her own inclusion in the question. (Renewed)

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The Ratched was calm at first, slowly stirring as though from a strange dream. Mass confusion and chaos quickly followed. They were handling the crisis well. Updates poured in from planet-side and over the intercoms to the bridge, asking for orders. A hold position was issued while the more immediate concerns were dealt with and the staging area was reclaimed.

He felt oddly detached himself, his memories of the past few days a blur. He remembered Miranda, the crew of Serenity, fighting an Operative, but he could not recall how he was now on an Alliance Cruiser. Why was he here?

There was something confused, he knew - a sense of two distinct lives he had somehow witnessed, and even more as a double agent with the browncoats and the military. Lies and secrets, information he shouldn't know. There was something important and elusive about students of the Academy, but more important, he needed to use his security clearance to get away, and get down the elevator to the hangar. He had an Operative's identification, and he would use that instead of his own.

The repair team he'd recruited nodded to him, and with a powerful sense of unease, he held a katana blade he both knew and didn't, and stepped out from the lift. He needed to find Serenity , he knew, and also felt the urge to pray.

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After several tense minutes watching the proximity readings, Zoë reclined back from her fading adrenalin rush into the embrace of frayed cushions and upholstery. The green-lit black spires of the I.A.V. Ratched sank around the curvature of the horizon behind them as they settled into orbit. Nothing had launched after them, near as she could tell. No pursuit. Too damn close , she thought. They were always skirting the edge of disaster. At least they hadn't lost anyone this time, but it was a near miss.

Even so. They were safe, but for how long? Bunch of surprises in just a few days, and she still wasn't even sure what had just happened. That was a liability big

Comments
Monday, 03 December 2012 15:47
So they're away from the Ratched, which still appears to be out of of action (good!), and they look to be in the clear -- for now anyway. Although I'm not convinced they're completely out of the woods. There might be further consequences. I like the visit with the inhabitants of Ezra, and bringing back some of those choice OC's, like Boss Tuawati and Grandmother Hani. Although good riddance to the three young fighting women, I say--they were more trouble than they were worth! The Ezrans' misconception that Inara is Mal's bride and that all these thrilling heroics have to do with the two of them trying to impress each other -- so funny and so true in some ways. I also was very amused by Jayne's griping about having to go back to Ezra, and then his complete turnabout when Zoe tells him it pays. I especially liked Inara's scene with Mal in the infirmary, and how the little girl catalyzes her admission. And it just figures that Simon uses the safety harness for a routine takeoff. I do believe we still have some people who were rescued from the Ratched aboard -- will we find out more about them next chapter?
BYTEMITE
Monday, 03 December 2012 16:02
The Operative is still out there, and he still wants River's abilities or the other Academy students to use against the Alliance. But he also has other things to worry about. I might add a section dealing with the Operative to this chapter, I was planning to but I wanted to at least get this much put up.

We're going to fast forward a week after this, but we will get to meet those Academy students, who are harmless now, and River will also be released from her quarters and be able to sneak in to see her parents. Also, Simon will be letting Mal up and around by then, and we'll be arriving at Persephone, where we find out more about what has happened to Inara and the last of the loose ends will be tied up.

I still feel a little sorry for June, Lena, and Iris. They had some bad experiences, but they also made some mistakes and deliberately sabotaged Mal and the crew, so the anger they're getting is pretty justified. It's pretty obvious even to Zoe that they're just scared though, which is why she goes easy on them (for Zoe, anyway).
Thursday, 06 December 2012 04:50
They're finally away. I agree with EB though, not necessarily "safe"

I always enjoy Inara’s thoughts on Mal and of course Zoe’s musings on Mal and Inara, together or not.

Mal waking-up should make for some interesting conversation.
BYTEMITE
Thursday, 06 December 2012 05:42
Heh, you aren't joking about him waking up. *plot plot plot*
Thursday, 06 December 2012 21:41
Can't wait to see that ^
BYTEMITE
Thursday, 06 December 2012 21:47
I figured out a really excellent way to combine some stuff about how I wanted Mal to be after all this. Should be fun.

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