"Sir!"
A marine pushed through the olive canvas flaps of the field tent, used for a temporary sleeping arrangement for the ground forces. Belatedly, the young man realized his mistake, as the captain rolled over on his cot and propped himself up on his elbow with a tired expression.
The young lieutenant, as though sensing his imminent demotion, came to an abrupt halt and saluted. "Permission to speak, sir!" Remarkably, he didn't think to alter the volume of his near shout.
The captain dragged himself upright, he hadn't been sleeping anyway. Really, the interruption was almost welcome, replaying as he was memories of reinforcing barriers, and laser fire, and women crying over the charred corpses of men who, just moments before, had been shouting at the security forces in an unfamiliar tongue. "Clearly your message is urgent enough it can't wait until morning," he replied dryly. He hoped. "At ease."
"Yessir." But the lieutenant didn't relax; if anything, the boy looked ready for a dressing down, like a drill sergeant from basic training might swoop down on him at any moment. He remembered this soldier now from the night before; despite the action earlier in the day, despite the vague resemblance of the open-faced helmet to a samurai warrior of old, the new-minted officer's armor still had its factory polish. "Kurtz VMO-3 reporting in from patrol on the east airstrip." The captain waved the boy on. "They were ambushed, sir."
Not unexpected, and he could see how it might have happened. Reduced visibility, and his men were all green, overeager and out looking for glory. They'd simply seen an opportunity to chase after. He sighed. "How many?" he asked, reaching under the cot for his folded grey trousers and mao jacket.
"Four casualties, two dead." Half the squad. "And they took the roller."
His mind stumbled over the news, taking a few moments to attempt to process the informa
"You can't take the sky from me!"
"Even then, he learned that there wasn't so much a man could lose that he couldn't lose more. Here he was now, with lifetimes of regret for them who ended premature, for Wash and Zoe, Kaylee and Simon, for the Shepherd, and even Jayne.
"And Inara, he could pour his heart out and fill an ocean with things unsaid. Things he couldn't ever say, not when they were nearly out of air, not even to even to say goodbye on some godforsaken moon; things he whispered in her ear, arms wrapped around her when he was dreaming, that scraped him raw when he was awake."
Nicely put. And then, of course, when he does see her moments later, he can't say any of that!
Very nice!
Inara did want to make sure he was okay, but it was just so hard to resist once she had her hands on him.
Also, Jayne is one of the funnest characters to write an action sequence for because you can really load it up with testosterone, scathing sarcasm, slapstick, and an almost flippant and mean sense of humour.
You certainly have a great handle on Mal and Jayne, and the crew. So, the henchmen of Serenity have been rescued!
I’m looking to see what happens next…..?
BPZ, still holding
This is my favourite part: And Inara, he could pour his heart out and fill an ocean with things unsaid. Things he couldn't ever say, not when they were nearly out of air, not even to say goodbye on some godforsaken moon; things he whispered in her ear, arms wrapped around her when he was dreaming, that scraped him raw when he was awake.
Mostly - but not only - because it really does bother me that they never confessed their feelings when they thought they were facing imminent death. I mean, nothing to lose or what? Anyway, we've talked about that before, I'm sure.
Loved your Rookies, as well. Go Byte!
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