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Sunday, January 30, 2011

Inara's shower is interrupted.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4662    RATING: 10.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Tentative repost, second attempt.

This one was inspired by the works of Thomas Zhang (Steamed) GillianRose (Coming Clean) Alliase (Steam Clean) and 2x2 (It was a Dark and Steamy Night). Pure Mal Inara snark and fluff, mostly friendship, but with hints of romantic interest. You know, like them when they're not fighting.

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The warm droplets hissed against the marble tiles and ankle deep water, raining down from the elegant wooden trellis overhead. The bath salts dissolved in a swirl as she poured them, sprinkled from the ladle set aside on the steps around the pool.

Inara leaned back into the spray and wrapped her arms around herself, tilting her head back to look up, through the atrium at the evening sky. She closed her eyes, dark as the night themselves, and let herself feel it all: the steam, the massage of the water over her body, the jasmine fragrance beginning to fill the air. The sadly sweet music of the érhù piped over the sound system shifted in response to the chemosensors. A contented sigh left her as the tension washed away.

Here, she didn’t have to think of the idiot captain, as she privately called him, sometimes affectionately, and sometimes not so affectionately. About his near heart attack when he found out how much she was paying for their rooms. And the way he kept eyeing the guests, staff, and decorations like they were about to attack him. Or how he fought with the bellboys over their luggage… Her luggage in particular.

A door opened, and closed, and she stopped to listen. “Hello?” No response, but she couldn’t bring herself to care yet. She raised her hands, lifted her drenched black tresses from her neck, a soothing stream running down her shoulders and back.

But slowly, the quiet built into a sense of unease. This was Persephone, and although a nicer part of the world, they weren’t without enemies here. Dripping, she stepped out of the pool, reaching for the robe she’d hung off one of the posts, wrap

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Sunday, 30 January 2011 19:32
Mini-epilogue!

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The crew stared at the scene before them: Inara, draped over the top of Mal, both of them fast asleep with a quilt over the top of them. Almost as one, they eagerly turned to their resident psychic for her prognosis.

River gave a disappointed and annoyed teenage huff. "Didn't work."

Their faces fell, followed by a series of groans and sighs.

"Why can't they see what's in front of them?" Kaylee whined, her little romantic spirit heartbroken at the resistance of her best friend and her captain to give in.

Zoë shook her head. "They're both too proud," she answered simply. Time was wasting too, but she smiled sadly seeing them. "For now, I think it's enough they aren't fightin'."

Jayne shrugged, already having lost interest. "Hey, can we get s'more dip soon? Kinda grew on me."

Simon's nose wrinkled in disgust. "It certainly did."
Sunday, 30 January 2011 19:33
Side note: nervous...
Sunday, 30 January 2011 20:11
Awesome!!! Loved the whole crew trying to get them together
Sunday, 30 January 2011 20:41
Thanks. :) These are old ones, but I started to feel bad about removing them, because no one I know particularly likes fanfiction dot net, and they all preferred it when they were here.
Monday, 31 January 2011 12:58
Utterly brilliant! You totally captured Inara and Mal to perfection. I so loved this, it is the type of thing Inara would do in an attempt to help and the way Mal complicates things is funny, touching and typical. I can almost hear the haunting sounds of the erhu and smell the fragrant jasmine and I just about melted at Inara decided to grab her quilt to go and join Mal on the couch! Yay, love a happy ending. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Tuesday, 01 February 2011 22:20
Jayne was brilliant, even as a smelly cameo! And really the question has to be, what happens when they wake up? Thanks for reloading this - it's great.
Tuesday, 01 February 2011 23:47
AMDOBELL: There's a bell boy out there now who needs therapy after being the recipient of a Mal death glare.

Jane0904: they put him up to eating the dip, and having to live with it for a few weeks now, I suspect they're seriously beginning to regret it. The next time they go shopping some garlic bean dip will be going out the airlock, and there will be Jayne confusedly looking through the grocery bags in the galley.
Friday, 06 May 2011 16:33
Heheh, that was beautiful. So Mal, I could practically see Inara roll her eyes at him. :D Thank you for sharing!! :D
Monday, 10 October 2011 18:56
Never said how much I like this one. Just re-read it today...made me smile at the images you paint.

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